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Character Review — Ginny Carey

Consider Ginny Carey, One of My Original Characters

So, who is Ginny Carey?

The secondary communication officer (she works nights) on the Valentina Tereshkova is important to the storyline in The Enigman Cave. In particular, this is because she has a mathematics background.

… and she also just so happens to be Dr. Jazminder Parikh’s ex.

Where Did Ginny Carey Come From?

In a small way, Ginny’s origins depend on a sorority sister of mine. Alix was a math major who went to library school. I lost touch with her for decades and, unfortunately, only heard of her death after the fact. But I based Ginny on her (somewhat) while I still believed she was alive.

But there are a number of key differences between them.

The Past is Prologue — Backstory for Ginny Carey

I honestly never thought to give Ginny much of a backstory. The main thing that any reader should understand about her is that she has more of a math background than you would normally expect from a communications professional.

But that’s about it.

Description

Slight and looking younger than she really is, Ginny has medium brown hair and eyes and looks bookish. But that is because, well, she is. If the story was taking place in our current time, she would most likely be either a teacher of small classes or a tutor or a librarian.

Purpose/Theme/Motivation

Loyal to Marnie, Ginny has no qualms about finding odd communications and immediately reporting them up the command food chain.

However, since she is a lower decks character, she does not learn about the really bad stuff with Carter until a lot later in the story than the higher up characters do. And, because she and Jazzie are no longer dating, she cannot get any insider information that way.

As Marnie explains in the book, it’s to give people like Ginny plausible deniability. If the senior staff are arrested or even executed, the idea is that Ginny and people like her would have a fighting chance to escape punishment.

Quotes from Ginny Carey {she and Dr. Simon Mendoza are on the surface, looking to capture an alien animal}

Ginny and Simon walked to the stand of ferns and found undergrowth. “Here, jackalope, jackalope,” she called.

“Silly gal. What if it’s a Jill and not a Jack?”

“Is that even possible? What if they’re just single gender?”

“Me you’re asking? I have no idea.” He set down a cage on the ground. “Pity we don’t have bait. Any idea what they eat?”

“When Brian was down here, he said he saw one of them with a small fern frond in its mouth. But who knows which species of fern? Aren’t there, like, three dozen found so far?”

“Approximately,” Simon said. “Here jackalope, jackalope.” She elbowed him.

Relationships

The only relationship I have for her is the one with Jazminder. But why did they break up in the first place? According to the doctor, they just wanted different things out of life. But we’re only hearing one side of the story.

Then again, these are my characters, and I’ve only heard one side of the story as well. Hmm.

Conflict and Turning Point

Much like the main characters and higher-level supporting characters, Ginny’s turning point is essentially when it becomes obvious that the government at home is collapsing.

Continuity/Easter Eggs

Ginny Carey doesn’t star in any continuity or in any Easter eggs. And being more of a lower decks type of person, I did not put her into the prequel.

Future Plans

Right now, I don’t have any plans for her. However, there is some room in the Enigman universe for a sequel or two. In part, I covered some of this in the crossover story, Timelines are Alive. But Ginny was not in that one.

Also, there is a possibility that I might want to write a longer piece about returning to Earth and even confronting Carter and his cronies. Still, someone would have to stay behind on Enigma, and it makes more sense for someone in communications to do that.

For any of the protocols to actually make any sense, Marnie would have to take Astrid Hennigsen along, just in case there were any communications issues on the way back to the mother planet. By the same token, Marnie would also have to take Jazminder with her.

Hence, Ginny and Jazzie would most likely not have a reconciliation. Although keeping scenes of interacting with the Enigmans could work. I don’t know. The truth is, I have never really sat down and tried to map out a sequel.

Ginny Carey: Takeaways

For a lesbian ex-girlfriend character, she started off as being almost a throwaway character. But then I figured out the mystery and came to realize that she would be the most perfect person to solve it. Go, Ginny!


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Character Reviews: The Enigman Cave

Marnie Shapiro
Trixie LaRue
Jazminder Parikh, MD
Lex Feldman
Benjamin Chase
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Self-Review – None of This is Real

Let’s Look at None of This is Real

Check out None of This is Real.

I wrote this story during the first quarter of 2018. Although it may have been earlier.

Background for None of This is Real

It is entirely possible that I was thinking about the old Star Trek: Voyager episode, Fair Haven when I wrote this piece.

But do keep in mind: I never actually saw that entire episode! I just know about it from the internet.

Plot

Everything in Laurie’s life has the ability to change as she wishes, as a part of her overall entertainment program. This even includes what’s to be seen outside the windows of the offices where she works.

When she hires a new Vice President of Marketing, sparks fly. And as the café where they have lunch changes, so do dozens if not thousands of other little details.

But what’s real? Why, nothing, of course, except for Laurie herself. It’s just like the title says.

Characters

The characters are Laurie and Jason. The story is told entirely from Laurie’s point of view. She is the CEO of an unnamed company. Jason is a new hire, the Vice President of Marketing.

Memorable Quotes

Laurie stared out the windows of her high rise office. The view of Boston was, as always, spectacular. She waved her hand over the scene in a very deliberate way – left to right, fingers splayed, at eye level, and the outdoor scene changed to Jakarta. Another wave and it was Pittsburgh. Another and the scene became Nairobi.

A cough behind her interrupted her reverie. She turned around. “Oh, Jason, you startled me.”

“Sorry,” he said. “I can see what the perks are of being the CEO. A variant window! I never thought I’d see one.” He fiddled with his tie.

“Yours is nice, too.”

“It’s just Liverpool. Which is fine. It’s good to see home and all. But it never becomes anywhere else. At least the picture moves.”

“Right. You could be stuck with one of the stationary ones in Sales.”

“Or just a regular old view of Mars, like in Clerical.”

“Why did you come here? Are you dissatisfied with your new job and your new office?”

“Oh no, not at all,” Jason said. “It’s more that I was wondering if I could ask you to lunch. Is that allowed?”

“Hell, we could call it business, and it would all be deductible,” Laurie said, smiling.

“I, well,” he played with his tie some more, threatening to wrinkle the expensive green Chinese silk creation from the best-known Italian fashion house.

“Hmm?”

“I was kind of hoping it wouldn’t have to be business.” He paused and then face palmed. “I mean all business. I’d rather it wasn’t strictly, 100% business, if that’s okay with you.”

Genre and Overall Mood

The genre is hard science fiction. And so far as the overall mood goes, it’s kind of dreamy and a bit romantic. On balance, it’s a positive story.

Rating

The story has a K rating.

Takeaways from None of This is Real

I really love the premise for this one, and I think it’s got the makings of something more. But not necessarily about Jason and Laurie, per se. I think it’s a lot more likely that the concept of variant windows would work well in a universe.

Since this story already takes place on Mars, there is virtually nothing stopping me from setting it in the Obolonk universe and calling it a day. Hell, I might even add something like this to the third trilogy.
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Character Review — Student #17

Consider Student #17, One of My Original Characters

So, who is Student #17?

In Untrustworthy, one of the conceits is that people don’t really have names at birth. Cabossians, instead, get names later. But they are called by their numbers as adults, anyway.

As a result, this character does not have an actual name. And, later in the story, he never actually chooses one for himself.

Where Did Student #17 Come From?

When I was first developing Ixalla, I wanted her to be a dedicated teacher. And the best place, I feel, to show her dedication would be in the eyes of her students.

After all, if you had a teacher who inspired you, kept you together, and maybe even kept you alive, wouldn’t you want to remember that person?

The Past is Prologue — Backstory for Student #17

I don’t really have much on him or really on any of the students beyond Five. But this is by design. He is, essentially, just some kid in Ixalla’s class. I never intended for him to have any sort of prior relationship to Ixalla beyond being a student in her class.

And so, their connection later is meant to be out of what was an almost random moment where they are just about thrown together.

Student #17: a Description

Like all other male Cabossians, he is bald and has a genital appendage on each hand, where we would normally have a pinkie finger. And, like all fertile male Cabossians, he has the ability to give birth to sterile children if impregnated by another fertile male.

Purpose/Theme/Motivation

When the story starts out, he’s a shy kid, already the kind of child who Five would pick on. But even as he becomes physically weaker, he shows unexpected reserves of strength.

Once you get to the end of the book, it becomes clear that, even though he’s got limitations, he can take care of himself.

Quotes for Student Number Seventeen

Student Number Seventeen looked at Ixalla as she awoke, and his tone was rather grave. “We are running out of nutritional supplements.”

Ixalla sighed when she inspected their stash. It was all too true. “…I imagine that the supply chain has broken down, all along the line, even as far as City Number Thirty-one.” The statement gave her pause, and then she was able to collect herself.

“T-teacher Number 7,999,533,628?” inquired Student Number Seventeen, “Are you all right?”

“Yes, I, huh, I could have sworn that that woman, that she and I had a history and, and it had something to do with City Number Thirty-one.” She waved a hand dismissively. “I suppose I am losing my mind, is all.” She chuckled a little.

“What is so funny, Teacher?”

“You calling me Teacher and referencing my number,” Ixalla explained. “I think maybe by now the three of us all know each other well enough that you can use my name. And once we get the two of you back to your parents, when you are of age, they’ll, well, they will name you, of course.”

“What if my parents are gone?” asked the unknown girl. “I do not even know if they are.”

“I – let’s think positively, shall we?” Ixalla tried to remain upbeat, but even she had to admit that the girl had a point. She no longer had her identification card, after all. And with tablet grid communications completely down… there was no way whatsoever to find the unknown girl’s family.

“We’ll never find them,” the unknown girl said sadly. “We all know this, right?”

“I – just, it’s not impossible,” Ixalla said. She drew them closer to her. “You may call me Ixalla. That is my true name. Not, not seven billion and change, but Ixalla. Know who I am. Just, just, know me.”

“Y-yes, Ixalla,” Student Number Seventeen tried the new designation on for size. “Thank you for telling it to us. But to me you will always be my teacher.”

Relationships

While I never give him a romantic relationship, he does adopt a daughter. And he continues to have a brother and sister style of relationship with the unknown girl.

Conflict and Turning Point

Like with the other characters in the story, Student Number Seventeen’s turning point is when the instructions and the dissatisfaction collide and eventually turn into city-wide (if not planet-wide) riots. But I never actually show him participating in any of that.

However, this makes perfect sense, seeing as he is already fairly severely physically disabled by this moment in the overall storyline. And so, even if he was still with his parents somehow, he would likely be hiding during the worst of it.

Continuity/Easter Eggs

Like with most of what is connected to Untrustworthy, there really are no continuities or Easter eggs for this character. And for the most part, there really can’t be any, anyway.

Future Plans

I like the way Untrustworthy ends, so there are no plans for a sequel. This character did not show up in the prequel. At this point in time, I have no other plans for him.

Student #17: Takeaways

Sympathetic, shy, and ultimately traumatized, Student #17 is like a phoenix rising from the ashes of Caboss.

For this reason alone, along with Ceilidh O’Malley from The Real Hub of the Universe and Neil Murphy from Mettle, he is one of the more hopeful characters I have ever written.


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Character Reviews: Untrustworthy

Character Review—Adger
Character Review—Ixalla
Review—Tathrelle
Character Review—Velexio
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Self-Review – A Path Not Taken … Much

Let’s Look at A Path Not Taken … Much

While I suppose that I can never really be sure as to exactly what I was thinking when I wrote A Path Not Taken … Much, I can say that the narrator ends up having a particularly bad day.

I wrote this story during the second quarter of 2018.

Background

I was most likely thinking about the old Ray Bradbury story, A Sound of Thunder when I wrote this one. Although the story and the endgame are just a little bit different.

And plagiarism/copyright violations have never, ever been my intentions.

Plot for A Path Not Taken … Much

Without too much of a plot to speak of, the narrator is somehow relating their complaints about the rules for visiting this particular alien world. And I say somehow, because it seems as if, by the time you get to the end of the piece, that that would not be possible.

In any event, little do the narrator and the reader, for that matter know—those rules are there for a damned good reason.

A casual disregarding of the rules leads to the main character’s spectacularly bad day.

Characters on a Path Not Taken Much

The only character is a narrator who I neither name nor describe. But the whole short story is rather sketchy, so that totally tracks.

Memorable Quotes

The first thing they tell you is not to stray off the path. And I did, so that one’s on me. Mea culpa, mea maxima culpa.

But what they don’t tell you is that the parts off the path are kind of the most fun. Although I’m sure the tour guide wouldn’t say so.

It’s an alien world, they said. The natives might not take too kindly to someone just barging in, they said. And every visitor is an ambassador for Earth, they said.

Oh, please. It’s not like I’m some diplomat or something.

Rating

The story has a K rating.

Takeaways for A Path Not Taken … Much

I think this one works pretty well as a kind of ultimate FAFO story. You know, fuck around and find out.

I can see a few places where I could cut some words and trim down the prose. Since it’s 174 words right now, it is not outside the realm of possibility that I would be able to cut it down enough for it to be accepted as a drabble somewhere.

And so, this little dollop of a creepy short story just might find a home after all.

And then I can dedicate it to all of those annoying people who I have ever known, who thought that the rules did not apply to them. Well, they did, and they still do.

Jerks.

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Jewish Characters in my Fiction

Who are the Jewish Characters in my Fiction? Why Do They Matter?

Beyond the Easter eggs (er, afikomen) in my work, who are my Jewish characters? After all, there are far more Jewish surnames than Shapiro! And Shapiro is an Ashkenazi name, from Germany.

But we’re not all Ashkenazi, and we’re not all from Germany. Although I have a tendency to favor those kinds of names in my writing. But that’s more because those names are more familiar and easier for most Westerners to pronounce.

And please don’t see the continuing Shapiro parade as necessarily implying an actual familial relationship between characters crossing universes. It’s not the equivalent of Smith, but it’s close enough, I suppose.

Why Talk About My Jewish Characters Now?

Today, the original date of posting this blog entry, is two years since the October 7th massacre.

My feeling about adding Jews as characters has always been a kind of message to those who hate us: you didn’t get all of us. Take that, antisemites!

And, more importantly, we’re thriving. And so, I’d rather counter such horrors with joy. We’re all right. We’re better than all right.

How Does Their Background Define and Inform my Jewish Characters?

Well, as we say, it depends.

Just like for real live people, my Jewish characters don’t always look to their roots when they make decisions, speak, think, work, move houses, marry, or anything else.

However, their roots can sometimes define these decisions and life changes. Or, they can affect how the character is perceived by others.

After all, we might look at someone wearing a large cross around their neck differently from how we would look at a person wearing a tee shirt that says, ‘I love pot’.

For characters who are a lot more religious, the question of keeping kosher will probably inform their choices. So will (most likely) questions of where to be able to worship and, if a character is single, if there are any Jews in the area who could be marriage material.

For not so religious characters, the kosher laws may not matter at all. Or, they may be an occasion to be naughty or to simply not tell a more religious family member or friend.

Rather than simply turn this blog post into a list of Jewish characters, I think it makes more sense to divide the characters up in a few different ways.

The Past

No discussion of characters of any sort from the past (whether Jewish or not) would be complete without talking about The Real Hub of the Universe and The Duck in the Seat Cushion.

Let’s start with the former.

Herschel Taub

When Ceilidh first meets the entity she names Shannon Duffy, they tell her that their most recent ‘subject’ before her was a Jewish man who immigrated to the United States—Herschel Taub. Herschel has recently died when the entity meets Ceilidh.

For Shannon, the hardest part is that Herschel’s wife, Blima, did not allow them to see the subject until it was too late, and he had already died.

Blima Shapiro Taub

While Blima may at times feel like a villain in the Real Hub universe, I think that a reader should keep in mind that she’s in a rather awkward position. Here she is, married to a man she barely knows (which was typical for the time).

I capture a bit of their wedding day in the short story, The Bride.

But her husband has a male companion who is odd and who is around at all hours. And this companion knows her husband far better than she ever can or will. Would she be jealous?

I think that’s almost a given. But at the same time, she could be in a rather good position. Herschel would be held back from any truly rash behavior, and the entity would protect him. The likelihood of Blima being widowed young was very low.

For Blima, as they say on Facebook, it’s… complicated.

Levi Altschuler AKA Shannon Duffy

While I’ve already covered this character elsewhere, and they aren’t human, anyway, I think they still belong here, in a discussion of Jewish characters in my works.

I like the idea of them observing human culture through the eyes of the Jewish community over the ages. It’s likely that they saw a great deal of violence. Did Shannon ever intervene? I believe that an entity that believes in justice would.

However, it’s likely that a human (perhaps centuries earlier than Herschel’s birth) would have asked Shannon to stop, probably fearing the entity’s actions would be doing more harm than good.

Now, let’s turn to The Duck in the Seat Cushion.

Lisette Bloch Tanner Kleinman

MJ’s mother survives the Second World War and the occupation of France by becoming a partisan. She and her sister fight the Nazis although Lisette doesn’t carry a gun. Rather, like my real life great-aunt, she smuggles tobacco and other contraband.

Lisette is also more observant than MJ, at least at the start. But she’s mindful of the majority culture in Oklahoma and does not seem to have objected when Walt took the kids to church.

One person I have never covered is Walt’s sister Suzie, who is dead before the book starts. Were she and Lisette friends? I like to think they were, and that Suzie would have enjoyed having an exotic sister-in-law to teach the ropes and spend time with.

Sid Tanner

MJ’s older brother looks a lot more traditionally Jewish than she does, and I almost see Sid with a kind of John Tuturro look (even though the actor is Catholic). Sid also ends up as an accountant and seems to live an almost stereotypical mid-twentieth century Jewish life.

But Sid is also as much a product of the Tanner farm as MJ is. He can balance the books and milk a cow. Later in life, he and Nadine make Aliyah. That is, they emigrate to Israel permanently. In the final chapters, the reader learns they’re living in Tel Aviv.

MJ Tanner

The heroine of The Duck in the Seat Cushion does not look like most people picture Jews as looking (she’s blonde and favors her father’s midwestern WASPy looks). This saves her from the worst antisemitism in her school until after Sid graduates.

Then, unfortunately for MJ, it’s open season on her.

While MJ does not marry a Jewish man, Jim does eventually convert.

Nadine Shapiro Tanner

Sophisticated Nadine takes her fashion cues from Marlo Thomas in That Girl.

Much like Sid and MJ’s stepbrother Hal Brown, jr., Nadine is a visually artistic person. But in her case, she is more of a designer than Hal (who is more of a photographer).

Named after Nadia, a woman who hid her mother during World War II until they were betrayed, Nadine has the weight of her parents’ expectations on her.

Shlomo and Rakhel Shapiro

These two Holocaust survivors met in a transit camp after the end of the hostilities. They came to America and Shlomo was able to get work as a professor. When he gets a tenured position in Oklahoma, they come to the Midwest.

It’s…a bit of a culture shock.

They are surprisingly good natured, and their own sweetness is magnified when Walt and his second wife, Graceanne, embrace them as family when Sid and Nadine marry. Without this new-found family, Rakhel and Shlomo would have been extremely isolated in Broken Arrow.

Veronique Jacobson Royce

Unlike her cousin Lisette, or Lisette’s sister Jeanne, Veronique did not spend WWII in the French resistance. For one thing, she was a lot younger. It was simply impractical.

So, instead, she was hidden by nuns after escaping the day the Nazis came to round up a number of people from the Paris Jewish ghetto. This was the last day Veronique saw her parents.

After the war, she remained in Paris for a couple of years, living with the mother of a slain schoolmate. Once that woman died, Veronique and her friend, the former resistance fighter Michel Kleinman, left on a ship bound for Canada.

At age fifteen, Veronique bluffed her way into a legal secretary program.

Michel Kleinman

A resistance fighter, he knew Lisette and was in love with her sister. But Jeanne was killed during the war. Michel went to Canada with Ariel and other survivors.

When Lisette left the family and stayed in Quebec, he took up with her, and they married. With a strong sense of duty, Michel volunteered to serve in Vietnam for the American war effort. His unit called him Mike. He was killed while Lisette was pregnant with Ariel.

Ariel Kleinman Royce

Ariel of course never knows her biological parents. Her mother passes on when she’s not even two years old yet. But Veronique loves her and has been raising her from the jump anyway.

MJ suggests to Walt and Graceanne that they might want to have Veronique and Ariel live with them. Ariel is, after all, MJ and Sid’s half-sister. Graceanne is all-too eager to raise the girl, probably due to having lost her own daughter tragically.

And so, Ariel and Veronique come to live with the Tanner clan. When Veronique marries Jack Royce, they formally adopt Ariel.

Ariel grows up to marry a woman of color named Tanya. They have six cats!

Jewish Characters from More or Less the Present Day

Of course, MJ, Sid, Nadine, Veronique, and Ariel all fit into this category.

But so do some of the characters from Mettle.

I personally love the idea and the dynamic of showing Jews surviving an apocalyptic event. And they are able to do so without losing their humanity or their faith in the process.

Noah Braverman

In a lot of ways, Noah is the epitome of the ‘good son’. He’s smart and has a good job, and he’s a big part of why his mother is not in an extended care facility (nursing home).

However, even though I never put it ‘on screen’, the course of his mother’s illness has to be wearing on him.

If the events of the story had not taken place, he would likely have either paid for more intensive aid than Olga could provide or would find a nursing home for his mother. At least during the story, she’s not a completely empty shell.

Eleanor Braverman

Eleanor is far from a standard ‘Jewish mother’. Rather, she is an intellectual, a fact which makes her decline even more heartbreaking.

I see her almost as a Bostonian version of a super-smart Jewish woman living on the Upper West Side of Manhattan and going to art galleries in her spare time.

Olga Nicolaev

With a last name that translates to something like Nichols or Nicholson, Olga’s Jewishness is a lot more subtle. But when the group has to bury Eleanor, Olga knows the Mourners’ Kaddish by heart.

Jewish Characters of the Future

Now we’re talkin’. There are so many of them. We’ll start with the first Obolonk trilogy.

Greg Shapiro

Wisecracking Greg is almost like a 1940s gumshoe. About the only thing I don’t have him do is wear a fedora. He’s not too observant—in one scene, he reminisces about having hit on Peri, who is canonically Christian. Greg also hits on Akanksha Kondapalli.

Let’s move onto characters from The Enigman Cave.

Marnie Shapiro (Chase)

When we first see Marnie in Bet on Marnie, she’s married to Dr. Ben Chase, who is about as WASP-y as anyone can get.

She is not looking for love, and her falling in with Lex Feldman is serendipity rather than anything she planned. But he’s one of the few people on the ship who can understand and appreciate the concept of strip dreidel.

Lex Feldman

Lex also has a history of dating outside the faith. In fact, he had proposed to Amy Allenby, but she turned him down, before the mission started.

Let’s move onto characters from Time Addicts (the second Obolonk trilogy).

Josie James

Josie, in some ways, is about as lapsed as you can get. After all, she does take up with a Muslim guy. But just like Marnie with Lex, it’s not through any sort of preplanning on anyone’s part. It just…happens.

Through Josie, because she’s the main character, the reader learns of family gatherings centered around a number of Jewish holidays, including Chanukah. A number of regularly scheduled family get-togethers makes a lot of sense for this clan.

After all, they live on different orbs within the Solar System. It’s the only practical way to see each other.

Hayley James Shapiro

I wanted to single out Hayley because she’s modern Orthodox. While many of their siblings are more lapsed, Hayley picks up the slack singlehandedly. And…she’s sometimes the butt of jokes. As in, someone will order a BLT at a restaurant and say not to tell Hayley.

Like other Ashkenazi parents, Hayley names her children after deceased family members. Her son, Saddik (a name which means ‘righteous’ in Hebrew) is named for her father, Steven.

Hayley has wed an Israeli, Dov Shapiro, and she’s made Aliyah, just like Sid Tanner and Nadine Shapiro Tanner. And, she also lives in Tel Aviv.

Josie and Hayley’s Siblings and Other Family Members

Most of Josie’s other siblings are as lapsed as she is. Deb is married to Terrell, who is probably a Baptist. Greg is married to Ines, who is Catholic in name only.

Jewish Characters in my Shorter/Short Stories

There are definitely some! Julia Rosen in Lizzie Borden is Vital to the Timeline is snarky and kinda bored by…time travel? Well, eventually even amazing things are bound to get a little dull.

Emily Schechter in Naturalization is also a Jewish character. She gets literal aliens acclimated to life on Earth.

And the main character in Eight Nights is rather observant, but also kinda kooky.

Okay, very kooky.

My Jewish Characters: Takeaways

The Jewish experience is far more varied than I’ve depicted. Hell, I’ve barely scratched the surface! Imagine highly religious Jewish characters dealing with a lack of understanding or needs fulfillment in deep space?

I mean, do you honestly think that aliens living on, say, Alpha Centauri will be able to make good chicken soup? And don’t get me started on how tough it’ll be to find a halfway decent challah cover.

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Self-Review – Fragments

Let’s Look at Fragments

Fittingly, I only have fragments of memories of this ultimately haunting short story. I do know, however, that I wrote this story during the third quarter of 2018.

Background

With only the one word title most likely serving as the prompt, I do not have much to go on, reviewing it a good seven years later.

Fragments of a Plot

Deep Space Mission #14 finds a small system where a gas giant planet with four intact moons also has the remains of a fifth. But what secrets does the debris hold?

And then when the crew finds evidence of textiles, and dyed textiles to boot, it seems obvious. There had been some sort of civilization there. But what the hell had happened to it? And, more importantly, why?

Characters

The only character is the unnamed narrator. It is his or her report which has been dictated and is being sent to headquarters. Those headquarters are presumably still on Earth.

Memorable Quotes

Report to HQ: Deep Space Mission #14

It was once a large moon. But then the gravity from the planet must have hit it, hard, and it fell to pieces.

But ‘fell’ is not the right word. Because that is so not the right word. It’s more that it smashed. It seems to have essentially exploded.

We wouldn’t have known, not really. It looks like small asteroids. And that would have been quite the find by itself. An Asteroid Belt outside of the Solar System! But we checked and rechecked once we arrived, and there weren’t a lot of things we thought of as asteroids. Besides, they would have to be older. Older space debris, if it’s large enough, tends to collide and coalesce and become as close to spherical as it can. But this stuff hasn’t.

And so, it’s up to me and the science mission I’m running to try to figure out what’s going on with this cosmic Humpty Dumpty.

Fragments of a Rating

The story has a K rating.

Takeaways

It is highly possible that I was thinking about The End when I was writing this one. Either consciously or unconsciously.

But it doesn’t quite jibe with the end of, heh, The End, where fossil hunters find a much more intact planet with much clearer evidence of a fully functional civilization at its demise.

But that does not matter to our purposes right now.

I just hope that, if it ever turned out that it was our own civilization on the receiving end of such a mission, that the people making such a heartbreaking discovery would show even one-tenth of the compassion and sympathy of the narrator.
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Writing Progress Report – Third Quarter 2025

Progress Report – Third Quarter 2025

How was the third quarter 2025 for writing? So, I spent third quarter 2025 working on my website, including the whole newsletter… thing. I did a ton of writing while juggling, well, the rest of my life. So, there was that…

There was also a ton of time taken up by helping with my elderly father. My brother and I moved him into a much smaller place, so there was a lot of very fast downsizing. This included finding some of the first fiction I ever wrote.

Will it ever see the light of day (er, this blog)? I don’t honestly know.

Third Quarter 2025 Posted Works

First of all, I worked on a number of new short stories. A lot of these had been drafted on paper and so I spent some time editing them and getting them into electronic form. In addition, I finished some and combined others.

I also worked on editing older stories and finishing some, to tie up loose ends.

Then on Wattpad I posted nowhere, although I did take note of stats.

Milestones

Also, I have written over 3.91 million words (fan fiction and wholly original fiction combined, with about 2.13 million words in original writing!). So right now, my stats on Wattpad for wholly original works are as follows:

† Dinosaurs – 43 reads, 11 comments
• How to NaNoWriMo – ended up with 26,183 reads, 340 comments (this one was pulled from Wattpad due to their severing their association with NaNoWriMo)
† My Favorite Things (like kibble) – 1,004 reads, 133 comments
Revved Up – 59,549+ reads, 531 comments
† Side By Side – 22 reads, 2 comments
• Social Media Guide for Wattpad – 17,091+ reads, 592 comments
† The Canadian Caper – 531 reads, 37 comments
The Dish – 257 reads, 24 comments
There is a Road – 192 reads, 28 comments

Published Works as of Third Quarter 2025

Also, I am amassing quite the collection of published works! So, here’s everything that has found a home so far.

Untrustworthy, which is my first published novel. So yay!

A True Believer in Skepticism, published in Mythic Magazine.

Almost Shipwrecked, a story in the January 2019 edition of Empyreome, a site which unfortunately is no more. In addition, this story is now a section within a longer story completed in 2025—

Canaries, a short story in the March 29, 2019, edition of Theme of Absence.

Complications, a story in the Queer Sci Fi Discovery anthology. So this is an anthology where the proceeds went to supporting the QSF website.

Cynthia and Wilder Bloom, stories in the Longest Night Watch II anthology.

Props, a story in the Longest Night Watch I anthology. So this is an anthology where the proceeds go to Alzheimer’s research.

Surprises, a story in Book One of the 42 and Beyond Anthology set.

More Published Works

The Boy in the Band, a story in the Pride Park anthology. So this is an anthology where the proceeds go to the Trevor Project.

The Interview, the featured story in the December 14, 2018 edition of Theme of Absence. So they even interviewed me!

The Last Patient, a story in the Stardust, Always anthology. This was an anthology where the proceeds go to cancer research.

The Resurrection of Ditte, a story in the Unrealpolitik anthology.

This is My Child, a short story published in the April 8, 2019 edition of Asymmetry Fiction, another site which is no more.

Three Minutes Back in Time, a short story published in Mythic Magazine.

Killing Us Softly, a short story published in Corner Bar Magazine.

Darkness into Light, a short story published in Corner Bar Magazine.

Looks like Lizzie Borden is Vital to the Timeline is getting the nod, but I don’t have particulars yet. Stay tuned!

WIP Corner

In addition, my current WIPs are as follows:

The Obolonk Murders Trilogy – so this one is all about a tripartite society. But who’s killing the aliens?

The Enigman Cave – can we find life on another planet and not screw it up? You know, like we do everything else?

The Real Hub of the Universe Trilogy – so the aliens who live among us in the 1870s and 1880s are at war. But why is that?

Mettle – so it’s all about how society goes to hell in a hand basket when the metals of the periodic table start to disappear. But then what?

Time Addicts – No One is Safe – so this one is all about what happens in the future when time travel becomes possible via narcotic.

Time Addicts – Nothing is Permanent – this is the second in this trilogy. What happens when time is tampered with and manipulated in all sorts of ways? It’s the ultimate in gaslighting, for one thing.

Time Addicts – Everything is Up For Grabs – as the timelines smack together and continue to diverge, it gets harder to tell the “real” timeline from all the newer fake ones. And what if some of the changes are for the better?

The Duck in the Seat Cushion – in the 1960s, MJ Tanner is the only Jewish student in her school in Broken Arrow, Oklahoma. Navigating antisemitism is one thing. But when her mother abandon’s the family, MJ’s life gets even more complicated.

Prep Work

So, currently, my intention, for 2026 or 2027’s November writing, is to write the third trilogy in the Time Addicts/Obolonks universe. But I need to iron out the plot! So, I’ll undoubtedly spend some of this year on that. I have no name for this one yet.

For 2022 – 2026 NaNoWriMo/30Day50k events, I have decided to create a prequel for each of the 5 main universes.

These are: Real Hub of the Universe, Obolonks, Time Addicts (while the Obolonks and Time Addicts are in the same universe, I just plain want to write two separate prequels!), Untrustworthy, The Enigman Cave, and Mettle.

In 2022, I wrote the prequels for Time Addicts and The Real Hub of the Universe. For 2023, it was the Untrustworthy prequel and Obolonk prequels. And for 2024, it was the Enigman Cave prequel. The Mettle prequel is set for 2025.

But I just might end up bumping it in favor of a new idea that’s kicking around and it won’t let go….

So, I anticipate a lot of fun and perhaps a little confusion. But it’s all good!

Third Quarter 2025 Queries and Submissions

The older ones have moved. You can find them on my Publishing Stats page.

It’s been quiet. But that has been by design. Right now, I just plain don’t feel like putting myself out there these days. So, this is going to remain a small section for the time being.

In Progress

As of third quarter 2025, nothing is in the running for publishing.

I have updated the Submissions Grinder and know that, at some point, I will have to get back up on that horse.

But not yet…..

Third Quarter 2025 – Most Popular Posts and Pages

And, if it interests you, here are the three most popular posts and/or pages from this site!

I look at the following metrics, and here are the top 3 with them:

† Clicks – #1 – Dialog Tags; #2 – Getting Inspiration from TV Shows; #3 – Getting Story Ideas

• Impressions – #1 – Dialogue Tags (again!); #2 – Why use a Screen Name?; #3 – Avinash Kaushik’s Web Analytics 2.0, a Book Review

† Clickthru Rate (CTR) – #1 – Self-Review: Time Addicts: No One is Safe; #2 – Character Review — They Say This is the One – TSTITO; #3 – Character Review — Craig Firenze

• Position – #1 (average position of 1.0 for their respective keyword phrases) – Character Review — Dalton Farouk; TSTITO (again!); My Querying and Publishing Stats; and Self-Review – Scavenger Hunt at Lanterman’s Mill;

#2 – (listed at position 2.0) – Self-Review – That’s Alien Entertainment!; Getting Inspiration from Names; Quinnipiac Assignment 02 – ICM 527 – Strategic Planning, Formative Research, and Issues Management; and Quinnipiac Assignment 03 – ICM 527 – SWOT and PEST Analyses;

#3 – (average position of 3.0) Character Review — Tathrelle and The New Rules of Marketing & PR by David Meerman Scott, A Book Review.

I suspect there is not a lot of competition for some of these keyword phrases, but that’s all right.

Recent Blog Additions with Traction

In addition, self-reviews of the following newer stories or character reviews all showed up with stats this quarter:

The Escape Violinist
The Shimmering Wasteland
Cave Canem and Cave
Beacon: A Light Shines in Gloucester
Uninformed
African Escape
Leave Your Tone at the Message
Escape from Alien Mines
Brown Eyes Are the Law
I Trade This for my Life
The Field Gleaner
Frozen Fortress
Stellar Stowaway
Dinosaurs, a short story
Bet on Marnie
Side by Side
MJ Tanner
The Bleeper
Corwin Zachary
Mythic, a short story
Kitty Kowalski
Jealousy, a short story
Astrid Hennigsen
Sally Bowles AKA They Say This One Tiles Bathrooms Adequately

Third Quarter 2025 Metrics With a Few Surprises

While my clicks and impressions went down every month, my average clickthru rate and average kwp positions improved every month. What this is telling me is that the people who are getting to my blog seem to be liking what they’re seeing.

As a result, they seem to be clicking more often. However, at the same time, I may simply be winning some rather obscure keyword phrases. And while that may sound like bad news, I think it’s actually pretty good news.

After all, I write about some pretty obscure stuff. Would I like my metrics to be better? Well, sure, as that would probably lead to more sales. But I can afford to play the long game. You kind of have to, in my position.

Third Quarter 2025 – Productivity Killers

So, it’s looking for work, what else? And it’s looking like third quarter 2025 will not be the end of that. And, right now, making time to see my dad while I still can. I have been south to see him twice in September alone, and am returning in October.

Also, I will most likely be returning again before the end of the year. If I go back in December, then my husband will join me. These visits are not easy, and I write very little during them. Frankly, I’m shocked that I’m able to write at all.


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Character Review — Sally Bowles/They Say This One Tiles Bathrooms Adequately

Consider Sally Bowles/They Say This One Tiles Bathrooms Adequately, One of My Original Characters

So, who is Sally Bowles/They Say This One Tiles Bathrooms Adequately?

Of course, the real character Sally Bowles is from the film and play Cabaret. But in my universe, it’s more like a stage name for a character who hates their real name.

Or, like a new name that a trans human has taken for themself.

One of the ways that the Obolonks started to truly come alive for me was to create a reputationally-based naming system for them. And, in order to better reflect reality, they wouldn’t all have the best of reputations when Naming Day rolled around.

TSTO Tiles would be one such Obolonk. And it doesn’t help that they’re one of the offspring of the Obolonk big cheese, They Say This is the One.

Where Did They Say This One Tiles Bathrooms Adequately Come From?

When I was first putting together the reputation-based names for my Obolonk characters, this one’s name started off as just TSTO Tiles Bathrooms.

But of course, they didn’t really come alive until I added the adverb at the end. It offers (I believe) just the right touch of passive-aggression. It’s a lot like telling someone, you’re not so much of a problem child, most of the time.

Damning with faint praise, indeed.

The Past is Prologue — Backstory for They Say This One Tiles Bathrooms Adequately

A total or at least 50% screwup, TSTO Tiles does not fit in well with proper Obolonk society. Like other mods, they split the difference, acting like a more or less proper Obolonk much of the time, but mimicking human behavior and sexuality when out with their friends.

Sally Bowles, a Description

Like all the other Obolonks in the series, Sally Bowles is tall, bald, and an orange shade. The shade darkens as they age. But Sally isn’t that old, so they, like their siblings, is kind of an iced peach shade.

Purpose/Theme/Motivation

The overall arc for this species is essentially to start to fit in with human society and, in the process, change us as much as we are changing them. But here, in the first trilogy, the main motivation is to start to bridge the gap.

Quotes

There was one dressed in a short black pixie cut wig, over which there was a black bowler hat with a purple band. They wore a black leotard with a plunging v-neckline, and short shorts, dark hose held up by a black garter belt, and tall black boots. The makeup was heavy and dark, including impossibly long false eyelashes that were obviously not meant to be at all natural. That one was wearing some form of strategic padding, as Obolonks didn’t really have figures. There was an old-fashioned cigarette, lit and smoldering in a long holder.

The Obolonk approached, took a drag off the cigarette, and blew the smoke to the side. “You may be wondering who I’m dressed as.”…

Tommy tapped Peri on the shoulder and addressed the Obolonk directly. “You are They Say This One Tiles Bathrooms Adequately.”

The Obolonk cringed, and this time they exhaled their cigarette smoke directly at Tommy. “I’m a she and I’m Sally, Android.”

“I don’t care what the hell you’re calling yourself,” Peri said. “But his name is Tommy. I’d appreciate it if you used it.”

“Got it,” said Sally. “Follow me.” Tommy and Peri glanced at each other. “Oh, I’m completely harmless,” the Obolonk said. They followed.

Don’t forget your small hot gun in the clutch.

A doorway led to an office area where the music was a lot harder to hear. The Obolonk turned to face them. “I don’t know why you’re here, although I do apologize for my parent’s behavior. I know you came a really long way.”

“Sally,” Peri asked, “how long you been doing the Mod thing?”

“Over twenty years. Nice dress.”

Relationships

I don’t list any relationships for Sally. But dressed like that, Sally may be looking for some sort of companionship, either with a fellow mod Obolonk or even with a human.

Conflict and Turning Point

In accordance with the overall conflict and turning point in the first Obolonk trilogy, Sally’s issues aren’t as much a fight for survival as in the second trilogy.

Rather, her issues are more whether humans will continue to allow the Obolonk experiment to continue on our soil, or if we will go back to holding these kind and mostly friendly aliens at arm’s length, all for the sake of maintaining our own irrational prejudices.

Continuity/Easter Eggs

Apart from within the initial trilogy itself, there is no overarching continuity for They Say This One Tiles Bathrooms Adequately.

Future Plans for Sally Bowles

While I don’t really have future plans for this character, I do have plans for the storyline. And since Tommy 2000 can more or less live forever, his memory of Sally Bowles will stay with him.

So, perhaps, the name will come up again. I’ve barely started to outline the final trilogy, so I don’t really know yet.

They Say This One Tiles Bathrooms Adequately: Takeaways

A bit like Roger Clinton, Alice Roosevelt, Neil Bush, or Billy Carter, Sally Bowles is the family member that the head of society is so embarrassed by that they just plain want to sweep them under the rug and hope everyone forgets them.

But there’s more to Sally Bowles than flashy human-style clothes and makeup.


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Peri Martin
Greg Shapiro

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Tommy 2000
Selkhet 3000

Obolonks
Obolonk leader TSTITO

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Character Review — Astrid Hennigsen

Consider Astrid Hennigsen, One of My Original Characters

So, who is Astrid Hennigsen?

The communications officer on the Valentina Tereshkova is a vital part of The Enigman Cave. Although she’s nowhere near a main character (or a very high level supporting character), a lot of her actions drive the plot.

But as she would probably say, she’s just doing her job.

Where Did Astrid Hennigsen Come From?

Whenever you think of space opera, I think it’s inevitable to think at least a little bit about Star Trek. At least I do.

And, as a result, the series which are earlier in the timeline all have communications officers. But once you get to TNG, that role starts to fade, in favor of Operations or Counseling.

Someone still opens a channel, someone still announces that, “the hailing frequencies are open”, and someone inevitably answers calls, particularly generalized ones just sent to the ship itself.

But the role has changed in terms of acting as well. These characters (such as Tasha Yar) do more than just answer the phone.

When you go back to much earlier in the Trek timeline, the communications officer’s job is a lot harder, and it’s full-time. In Enterprise, Hoshi Sato tries to do translations on the fly. In TOS and Strange New Worlds, Nyota Uhura is the heart and soul of the ship.

And in Discovery, Ronald Bryce and William Christopher are efficient linguists, even as the time shifts from pre-TOS to the deep future.

These people are more than just computer jockeys.

The Past is Prologue — Backstory for Astrid Hennigsen

All of this being said; however, the last thing I wanted was for Astrid to be someone who is almost preternaturally gifted. She would be highly competent, but not in the sort of way where it’s not believable.

Astrid, in some ways, is someone I see as being kind of like your cousin who’s good at languages.

One bit of information I need to make clearer in editing is that she doesn’t necessarily want to be on the Val, working for Marnie. At one point, Marnie even says that this wasn’t Astrid’s first choice for an assignment.

But what was? I confess even I am not sure. But I don’t really see her as someone selfish enough to have wanted to work with someone pretty, just to advance her career. I don’t think Astrid is shallow like that.

Since Rosa Perrault got more depth in the prequel, maybe that could answer the question. Hmm. If Astrid wanted to work with Rosa, then she most likely wouldn’t see working for Marnie as being some sort of step down.

Astrid Hennigsen, a Description

Ethereally light and somewhat Scandinavian-looking, Astrid is also like your cousin who seems to get a sunburn just about whenever the weather is anything but a solar eclipse.

Purpose/Theme/Motivation

Astrid wants to do the right thing and do her work well. But at the same time, she also wants to make big discoveries and talk to aliens.

To her credit, she knows her role extremely well, and does not wish to step over anyone to get ahead.

Quotes {The Species they’ve found appears to be primitive; Astrid helps confirm that here}

Astrid said, “There’s even a third thing we know about the Enigmans.”

Marnie turned to her. “What is it, Astrid?”

“I’ve been listening and scanning for any sign of communications. Not just on Enigma but I’ve also been checking for anything coming from anywhere. And not just radio—I’ve been looking in the visible and invisible spectra. The light here is the same as the light on Earth or the Vega System or anywhere, really. I haven’t found anything. I’m not just looking for video or anything like that or listening for the top forty hits. I’m trying to discern patterns. If anyone ever tries to communicate, they have to be expecting that a receiver will understand them. To my mind, that means patterning. Even complicated patterning.”

“What did you find?” Peggy shifted from foot to foot, looking almost as peeved as Ben.

“I found nothing. There are no communications going on out here, just a few random tangent waves which are meaningless. They’re just a function of our orbit. The Enigmans don’t have transmissions of any sort. At least, none I can reasonably detect.”

Relationships

I did not give her any relationships. Sorry, character!

Conflict and Turning Point

Much like with the other characters in the story, the main turning point for Astrid, where she really crosses the veritable Rubicon, is when she agrees to disobey direct orders from Earth.

Continuity/Easter Eggs

While her look is rather similar to that of Ceilidh O’Malley, I don’t really have any other connections across universes for Astrid.

Future Plans for Astrid Hennigsen

She was barely in the prequel, although if I want to lean into her wanting to work with Rosa, I could potentially make them cordial. But I don’t think that’s necessary right now. Not every single question has to have an answer.

I need to remind myself of that, at times.

Astrid Hennigsen: Takeaways

This smart, cheerful communications officer brings in information and interprets it in ways which other characters cannot, and drives the plot while doing so. She is a 100% necessary character!


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Marnie Shapiro
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Self-Review – Jealousy

Let’s Look at Jealousy

Jealousy is the same kind of odd little bait and switch story as A Kitten. That is, I take you down a little garden path to make you believe a character is one way. But it turns out that this jealous characters is not who or what you expect him to be.

I wrote this story during the first quarter of 2021. The prompt word was just the title of this little piece.

Background for Jealousy

I absolutely love the canine point of view, and have tackled it before, in stories as different as Will’s Dog and Cynthia. But in this case, the narrator does not get an actual name.

Er, sorry, puppy.

Plot

As the narrator complains that someone or other is coming between him and a female special somebody, he eventually owns up to the fact that the inevitable is just plain going to happen. Whether he likes it, or not.

But it’s every soldier’s right to complain. And I suppose it is every spaniel’s right as well.

Characters

The characters are just the narrator and the two unnamed people they are referring to.

Memorable Quotes

She spends way more time with him than with me. Now, I strongly suspect there’s something going on. I mean, here’s my evidence.

He calls and she comes running. With me? Not so much. He comes over, and she pays a lot more attention to him than to me. In fact, they sometimes go into another room and make it impossible for me to get in! Surely she knows my limitations in this area. Yet she ignores my pleas.

Rating for Jealousy

The story has a K rating.

Takeaways

While this story may seem a little silly, the truth is, dogs really do exhibit certain forms of jealous behavior. And they can sometimes make their displeasure known in a rather violent manner. But I don’t suggest that here.

Our narrator is more perturbed than anything else.

But don’t eat his food.

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