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Jewish Characters in my Fiction

Who are the Jewish Characters in my Fiction? Why Do They Matter?

Beyond the Easter eggs (er, afikomen) in my work, who are my Jewish characters? After all, there are far more Jewish surnames than Shapiro! And Shapiro is an Ashkenazi name, from Germany.

But we’re not all Ashkenazi, and we’re not all from Germany. Although I have a tendency to favor those kinds of names in my writing. But that’s more because those names are more familiar and easier for most Westerners to pronounce.

And please don’t see the continuing Shapiro parade as necessarily implying an actual familial relationship between characters crossing universes. It’s not the equivalent of Smith, but it’s close enough, I suppose.

Why Talk About My Jewish Characters Now?

Today, the original date of posting this blog entry, is two years since the October 7th massacre.

My feeling about adding Jews as characters has always been a kind of message to those who hate us: you didn’t get all of us. Take that, antisemites!

And, more importantly, we’re thriving. And so, I’d rather counter such horrors with joy. We’re all right. We’re better than all right.

How Does Their Background Define and Inform my Jewish Characters?

Well, as we say, it depends.

Just like for real live people, my Jewish characters don’t always look to their roots when they make decisions, speak, think, work, move houses, marry, or anything else.

However, their roots can sometimes define these decisions and life changes. Or, they can affect how the character is perceived by others.

After all, we might look at someone wearing a large cross around their neck differently from how we would look at a person wearing a tee shirt that says, ‘I love pot’.

For characters who are a lot more religious, the question of keeping kosher will probably inform their choices. So will (most likely) questions of where to be able to worship and, if a character is single, if there are any Jews in the area who could be marriage material.

For not so religious characters, the kosher laws may not matter at all. Or, they may be an occasion to be naughty or to simply not tell a more religious family member or friend.

Rather than simply turn this blog post into a list of Jewish characters, I think it makes more sense to divide the characters up in a few different ways.

The Past

No discussion of characters of any sort from the past (whether Jewish or not) would be complete without talking about The Real Hub of the Universe and The Duck in the Seat Cushion.

Let’s start with the former.

Herschel Taub

When Ceilidh first meets the entity she names Shannon Duffy, they tell her that their most recent ‘subject’ before her was a Jewish man who immigrated to the United States—Herschel Taub. Herschel has recently died when the entity meets Ceilidh.

For Shannon, the hardest part is that Herschel’s wife, Blima, did not allow them to see the subject until it was too late, and he had already died.

Blima Shapiro Taub

While Blima may at times feel like a villain in the Real Hub universe, I think that a reader should keep in mind that she’s in a rather awkward position. Here she is, married to a man she barely knows (which was typical for the time).

I capture a bit of their wedding day in the short story, The Bride.

But her husband has a male companion who is odd and who is around at all hours. And this companion knows her husband far better than she ever can or will. Would she be jealous?

I think that’s almost a given. But at the same time, she could be in a rather good position. Herschel would be held back from any truly rash behavior, and the entity would protect him. The likelihood of Blima being widowed young was very low.

For Blima, as they say on Facebook, it’s… complicated.

Levi Altschuler AKA Shannon Duffy

While I’ve already covered this character elsewhere, and they aren’t human, anyway, I think they still belong here, in a discussion of Jewish characters in my works.

I like the idea of them observing human culture through the eyes of the Jewish community over the ages. It’s likely that they saw a great deal of violence. Did Shannon ever intervene? I believe that an entity that believes in justice would.

However, it’s likely that a human (perhaps centuries earlier than Herschel’s birth) would have asked Shannon to stop, probably fearing the entity’s actions would be doing more harm than good.

Now, let’s turn to The Duck in the Seat Cushion.

Lisette Bloch Tanner Kleinman

MJ’s mother survives the Second World War and the occupation of France by becoming a partisan. She and her sister fight the Nazis although Lisette doesn’t carry a gun. Rather, like my real life great-aunt, she smuggles tobacco and other contraband.

Lisette is also more observant than MJ, at least at the start. But she’s mindful of the majority culture in Oklahoma and does not seem to have objected when Walt took the kids to church.

One person I have never covered is Walt’s sister Suzie, who is dead before the book starts. Were she and Lisette friends? I like to think they were, and that Suzie would have enjoyed having an exotic sister-in-law to teach the ropes and spend time with.

Sid Tanner

MJ’s older brother looks a lot more traditionally Jewish than she does, and I almost see Sid with a kind of John Tuturro look (even though the actor is Catholic). Sid also ends up as an accountant and seems to live an almost stereotypical mid-twentieth century Jewish life.

But Sid is also as much a product of the Tanner farm as MJ is. He can balance the books and milk a cow. Later in life, he and Nadine make Aliyah. That is, they emigrate to Israel permanently. In the final chapters, the reader learns they’re living in Tel Aviv.

MJ Tanner

The heroine of The Duck in the Seat Cushion does not look like most people picture Jews as looking (she’s blonde and favors her father’s midwestern WASPy looks). This saves her from the worst antisemitism in her school until after Sid graduates.

Then, unfortunately for MJ, it’s open season on her.

While MJ does not marry a Jewish man, Jim does eventually convert.

Nadine Shapiro Tanner

Sophisticated Nadine takes her fashion cues from Marlo Thomas in That Girl.

Much like Sid and MJ’s stepbrother Hal Brown, jr., Nadine is a visually artistic person. But in her case, she is more of a designer than Hal (who is more of a photographer).

Named after Nadia, a woman who hid her mother during World War II until they were betrayed, Nadine has the weight of her parents’ expectations on her.

Shlomo and Rakhel Shapiro

These two Holocaust survivors met in a transit camp after the end of the hostilities. They came to America and Shlomo was able to get work as a professor. When he gets a tenured position in Oklahoma, they come to the Midwest.

It’s…a bit of a culture shock.

They are surprisingly good natured, and their own sweetness is magnified when Walt and his second wife, Graceanne, embrace them as family when Sid and Nadine marry. Without this new-found family, Rakhel and Shlomo would have been extremely isolated in Broken Arrow.

Veronique Jacobson Royce

Unlike her cousin Lisette, or Lisette’s sister Jeanne, Veronique did not spend WWII in the French resistance. For one thing, she was a lot younger. It was simply impractical.

So, instead, she was hidden by nuns after escaping the day the Nazis came to round up a number of people from the Paris Jewish ghetto. This was the last day Veronique saw her parents.

After the war, she remained in Paris for a couple of years, living with the mother of a slain schoolmate. Once that woman died, Veronique and her friend, the former resistance fighter Michel Kleinman, left on a ship bound for Canada.

At age fifteen, Veronique bluffed her way into a legal secretary program.

Michel Kleinman

A resistance fighter, he knew Lisette and was in love with her sister. But Jeanne was killed during the war. Michel went to Canada with Ariel and other survivors.

When Lisette left the family and stayed in Quebec, he took up with her, and they married. With a strong sense of duty, Michel volunteered to serve in Vietnam for the American war effort. His unit called him Mike. He was killed while Lisette was pregnant with Ariel.

Ariel Kleinman Royce

Ariel of course never knows her biological parents. Her mother passes on when she’s not even two years old yet. But Veronique loves her and has been raising her from the jump anyway.

MJ suggests to Walt and Graceanne that they might want to have Veronique and Ariel live with them. Ariel is, after all, MJ and Sid’s half-sister. Graceanne is all-too eager to raise the girl, probably due to having lost her own daughter tragically.

And so, Ariel and Veronique come to live with the Tanner clan. When Veronique marries Jack Royce, they formally adopt Ariel.

Ariel grows up to marry a woman of color named Tanya. They have six cats!

Jewish Characters from More or Less the Present Day

Of course, MJ, Sid, Nadine, Veronique, and Ariel all fit into this category.

But so do some of the characters from Mettle.

I personally love the idea and the dynamic of showing Jews surviving an apocalyptic event. And they are able to do so without losing their humanity or their faith in the process.

Noah Braverman

In a lot of ways, Noah is the epitome of the ‘good son’. He’s smart and has a good job, and he’s a big part of why his mother is not in an extended care facility (nursing home).

However, even though I never put it ‘on screen’, the course of his mother’s illness has to be wearing on him.

If the events of the story had not taken place, he would likely have either paid for more intensive aid than Olga could provide or would find a nursing home for his mother. At least during the story, she’s not a completely empty shell.

Eleanor Braverman

Eleanor is far from a standard ‘Jewish mother’. Rather, she is an intellectual, a fact which makes her decline even more heartbreaking.

I see her almost as a Bostonian version of a super-smart Jewish woman living on the Upper West Side of Manhattan and going to art galleries in her spare time.

Olga Nicolaev

With a last name that translates to something like Nichols or Nicholson, Olga’s Jewishness is a lot more subtle. But when the group has to bury Eleanor, Olga knows the Mourners’ Kaddish by heart.

Jewish Characters of the Future

Now we’re talkin’. There are so many of them. We’ll start with the first Obolonk trilogy.

Greg Shapiro

Wisecracking Greg is almost like a 1940s gumshoe. About the only thing I don’t have him do is wear a fedora. He’s not too observant—in one scene, he reminisces about having hit on Peri, who is canonically Christian. Greg also hits on Akanksha Kondapalli.

Let’s move onto characters from The Enigman Cave.

Marnie Shapiro (Chase)

When we first see Marnie in Bet on Marnie, she’s married to Dr. Ben Chase, who is about as WASP-y as anyone can get.

She is not looking for love, and her falling in with Lex Feldman is serendipity rather than anything she planned. But he’s one of the few people on the ship who can understand and appreciate the concept of strip dreidel.

Lex Feldman

Lex also has a history of dating outside the faith. In fact, he had proposed to Amy Allenby, but she turned him down, before the mission started.

Let’s move onto characters from Time Addicts (the second Obolonk trilogy).

Josie James

Josie, in some ways, is about as lapsed as you can get. After all, she does take up with a Muslim guy. But just like Marnie with Lex, it’s not through any sort of preplanning on anyone’s part. It just…happens.

Through Josie, because she’s the main character, the reader learns of family gatherings centered around a number of Jewish holidays, including Chanukah. A number of regularly scheduled family get-togethers makes a lot of sense for this clan.

After all, they live on different orbs within the Solar System. It’s the only practical way to see each other.

Hayley James Shapiro

I wanted to single out Hayley because she’s modern Orthodox. While many of their siblings are more lapsed, Hayley picks up the slack singlehandedly. And…she’s sometimes the butt of jokes. As in, someone will order a BLT at a restaurant and say not to tell Hayley.

Like other Ashkenazi parents, Hayley names her children after deceased family members. Her son, Saddik (a name which means ‘righteous’ in Hebrew) is named for her father, Steven.

Hayley has wed an Israeli, Dov Shapiro, and she’s made Aliyah, just like Sid Tanner and Nadine Shapiro Tanner. And, she also lives in Tel Aviv.

Josie and Hayley’s Siblings and Other Family Members

Most of Josie’s other siblings are as lapsed as she is. Deb is married to Terrell, who is probably a Baptist. Greg is married to Ines, who is Catholic in name only.

Jewish Characters in my Shorter/Short Stories

There are definitely some! Julia Rosen in Lizzie Borden is Vital to the Timeline is snarky and kinda bored by…time travel? Well, eventually even amazing things are bound to get a little dull.

Emily Schechter in Naturalization is also a Jewish character. She gets literal aliens acclimated to life on Earth.

And the main character in Eight Nights is rather observant, but also kinda kooky.

Okay, very kooky.

My Jewish Characters: Takeaways

The Jewish experience is far more varied than I’ve depicted. Hell, I’ve barely scratched the surface! Imagine highly religious Jewish characters dealing with a lack of understanding or needs fulfillment in deep space?

I mean, do you honestly think that aliens living on, say, Alpha Centauri will be able to make good chicken soup? And don’t get me started on how tough it’ll be to find a halfway decent challah cover.

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Writing Progress Report – Third Quarter 2025

Progress Report – Third Quarter 2025

How was the third quarter 2025 for writing? So, I spent third quarter 2025 working on my website, including the whole newsletter… thing. I did a ton of writing while juggling, well, the rest of my life. So, there was that…

There was also a ton of time taken up by helping with my elderly father. My brother and I moved him into a much smaller place, so there was a lot of very fast downsizing. This included finding some of the first fiction I ever wrote.

Will it ever see the light of day (er, this blog)? I don’t honestly know.

Third Quarter 2025 Posted Works

First of all, I worked on a number of new short stories. A lot of these had been drafted on paper and so I spent some time editing them and getting them into electronic form. In addition, I finished some and combined others.

I also worked on editing older stories and finishing some, to tie up loose ends.

Then on Wattpad I posted nowhere, although I did take note of stats.

Milestones

Also, I have written over 3.91 million words (fan fiction and wholly original fiction combined, with about 2.13 million words in original writing!). So right now, my stats on Wattpad for wholly original works are as follows:

† Dinosaurs – 43 reads, 11 comments
• How to NaNoWriMo – ended up with 26,183 reads, 340 comments (this one was pulled from Wattpad due to their severing their association with NaNoWriMo)
† My Favorite Things (like kibble) – 1,004 reads, 133 comments
Revved Up – 59,549+ reads, 531 comments
† Side By Side – 22 reads, 2 comments
• Social Media Guide for Wattpad – 17,091+ reads, 592 comments
† The Canadian Caper – 531 reads, 37 comments
The Dish – 257 reads, 24 comments
There is a Road – 192 reads, 28 comments

Published Works as of Third Quarter 2025

Also, I am amassing quite the collection of published works! So, here’s everything that has found a home so far.

Untrustworthy, which is my first published novel. So yay!

A True Believer in Skepticism, published in Mythic Magazine.

Almost Shipwrecked, a story in the January 2019 edition of Empyreome, a site which unfortunately is no more. In addition, this story is now a section within a longer story completed in 2025—

Canaries, a short story in the March 29, 2019, edition of Theme of Absence.

Complications, a story in the Queer Sci Fi Discovery anthology. So this is an anthology where the proceeds went to supporting the QSF website.

Cynthia and Wilder Bloom, stories in the Longest Night Watch II anthology.

Props, a story in the Longest Night Watch I anthology. So this is an anthology where the proceeds go to Alzheimer’s research.

Surprises, a story in Book One of the 42 and Beyond Anthology set.

More Published Works

The Boy in the Band, a story in the Pride Park anthology. So this is an anthology where the proceeds go to the Trevor Project.

The Interview, the featured story in the December 14, 2018 edition of Theme of Absence. So they even interviewed me!

The Last Patient, a story in the Stardust, Always anthology. This was an anthology where the proceeds go to cancer research.

The Resurrection of Ditte, a story in the Unrealpolitik anthology.

This is My Child, a short story published in the April 8, 2019 edition of Asymmetry Fiction, another site which is no more.

Three Minutes Back in Time, a short story published in Mythic Magazine.

Killing Us Softly, a short story published in Corner Bar Magazine.

Darkness into Light, a short story published in Corner Bar Magazine.

Looks like Lizzie Borden is Vital to the Timeline is getting the nod, but I don’t have particulars yet. Stay tuned!

WIP Corner

In addition, my current WIPs are as follows:

The Obolonk Murders Trilogy – so this one is all about a tripartite society. But who’s killing the aliens?

The Enigman Cave – can we find life on another planet and not screw it up? You know, like we do everything else?

The Real Hub of the Universe Trilogy – so the aliens who live among us in the 1870s and 1880s are at war. But why is that?

Mettle – so it’s all about how society goes to hell in a hand basket when the metals of the periodic table start to disappear. But then what?

Time Addicts – No One is Safe – so this one is all about what happens in the future when time travel becomes possible via narcotic.

Time Addicts – Nothing is Permanent – this is the second in this trilogy. What happens when time is tampered with and manipulated in all sorts of ways? It’s the ultimate in gaslighting, for one thing.

Time Addicts – Everything is Up For Grabs – as the timelines smack together and continue to diverge, it gets harder to tell the “real” timeline from all the newer fake ones. And what if some of the changes are for the better?

The Duck in the Seat Cushion – in the 1960s, MJ Tanner is the only Jewish student in her school in Broken Arrow, Oklahoma. Navigating antisemitism is one thing. But when her mother abandon’s the family, MJ’s life gets even more complicated.

Prep Work

So, currently, my intention, for 2026 or 2027’s November writing, is to write the third trilogy in the Time Addicts/Obolonks universe. But I need to iron out the plot! So, I’ll undoubtedly spend some of this year on that. I have no name for this one yet.

For 2022 – 2026 NaNoWriMo/30Day50k events, I have decided to create a prequel for each of the 5 main universes.

These are: Real Hub of the Universe, Obolonks, Time Addicts (while the Obolonks and Time Addicts are in the same universe, I just plain want to write two separate prequels!), Untrustworthy, The Enigman Cave, and Mettle.

In 2022, I wrote the prequels for Time Addicts and The Real Hub of the Universe. For 2023, it was the Untrustworthy prequel and Obolonk prequels. And for 2024, it was the Enigman Cave prequel. The Mettle prequel is set for 2025.

But I just might end up bumping it in favor of a new idea that’s kicking around and it won’t let go….

So, I anticipate a lot of fun and perhaps a little confusion. But it’s all good!

Third Quarter 2025 Queries and Submissions

The older ones have moved. You can find them on my Publishing Stats page.

It’s been quiet. But that has been by design. Right now, I just plain don’t feel like putting myself out there these days. So, this is going to remain a small section for the time being.

In Progress

As of third quarter 2025, nothing is in the running for publishing.

I have updated the Submissions Grinder and know that, at some point, I will have to get back up on that horse.

But not yet…..

Third Quarter 2025 – Most Popular Posts and Pages

And, if it interests you, here are the three most popular posts and/or pages from this site!

I look at the following metrics, and here are the top 3 with them:

† Clicks – #1 – Dialog Tags; #2 – Getting Inspiration from TV Shows; #3 – Getting Story Ideas

• Impressions – #1 – Dialogue Tags (again!); #2 – Why use a Screen Name?; #3 – Avinash Kaushik’s Web Analytics 2.0, a Book Review

† Clickthru Rate (CTR) – #1 – Self-Review: Time Addicts: No One is Safe; #2 – Character Review — They Say This is the One – TSTITO; #3 – Character Review — Craig Firenze

• Position – #1 (average position of 1.0 for their respective keyword phrases) – Character Review — Dalton Farouk; TSTITO (again!); My Querying and Publishing Stats; and Self-Review – Scavenger Hunt at Lanterman’s Mill;

#2 – (listed at position 2.0) – Self-Review – That’s Alien Entertainment!; Getting Inspiration from Names; Quinnipiac Assignment 02 – ICM 527 – Strategic Planning, Formative Research, and Issues Management; and Quinnipiac Assignment 03 – ICM 527 – SWOT and PEST Analyses;

#3 – (average position of 3.0) Character Review — Tathrelle and The New Rules of Marketing & PR by David Meerman Scott, A Book Review.

I suspect there is not a lot of competition for some of these keyword phrases, but that’s all right.

Recent Blog Additions with Traction

In addition, self-reviews of the following newer stories or character reviews all showed up with stats this quarter:

The Escape Violinist
The Shimmering Wasteland
Cave Canem and Cave
Beacon: A Light Shines in Gloucester
Uninformed
African Escape
Leave Your Tone at the Message
Escape from Alien Mines
Brown Eyes Are the Law
I Trade This for my Life
The Field Gleaner
Frozen Fortress
Stellar Stowaway
Dinosaurs, a short story
Bet on Marnie
Side by Side
MJ Tanner
The Bleeper
Corwin Zachary
Mythic, a short story
Kitty Kowalski
Jealousy, a short story
Astrid Hennigsen
Sally Bowles AKA They Say This One Tiles Bathrooms Adequately

Third Quarter 2025 Metrics With a Few Surprises

While my clicks and impressions went down every month, my average clickthru rate and average kwp positions improved every month. What this is telling me is that the people who are getting to my blog seem to be liking what they’re seeing.

As a result, they seem to be clicking more often. However, at the same time, I may simply be winning some rather obscure keyword phrases. And while that may sound like bad news, I think it’s actually pretty good news.

After all, I write about some pretty obscure stuff. Would I like my metrics to be better? Well, sure, as that would probably lead to more sales. But I can afford to play the long game. You kind of have to, in my position.

Third Quarter 2025 – Productivity Killers

So, it’s looking for work, what else? And it’s looking like third quarter 2025 will not be the end of that. And, right now, making time to see my dad while I still can. I have been south to see him twice in September alone, and am returning in October.

Also, I will most likely be returning again before the end of the year. If I go back in December, then my husband will join me. These visits are not easy, and I write very little during them. Frankly, I’m shocked that I’m able to write at all.


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Character Review — MJ Tanner

Consider MJ Tanner, One of My Original Characters

So, who is MJ Tanner?

Her full name is Mary Jacqueline Tanner, and she had such a strong voice that I just had to write about her. MJ is the quirky star of The Duck in the Seat Cushion.

Where Did MJ Tanner Come From?

Much like Josie James, Ceilidh O’Malley, and Craig Firenze, MJ emerged almost fully formed, and almost immediately.

The Past is Prologue — Backstory for MJ Tanner

Please recognize that this character review is going to have a ton of spoilers. So, you have been duly warned.

Before the action in the book gets underway, MJ is essentially just an Oklahoma farm girl, born in 1949, with her main difference being that her mother is fairly exotic, a Parisian war bride. MJ and her full-blooded brother Sid and their mother are all Jews.

They’re the only Jews in Broken Arrow.

Description

A somewhat stout, blonde Oklahoma farm girl, MJ laments that she got ‘none’ of her mother’s ethnic good looks. To me, she resembles a young Reese Whitherspoon and sounds somewhat similar.

MJ Tanner and her Purpose/Theme/Motivation

Because the book is written as a kind of mock memoir, a lot of MJ’s purpose in life is to get from point A (age fourteen/almost fifteen) to point Z (age seventy-five).

In the meantime, a lot of her motivations also center around facing her mother and learning to get along with her stepmother and stepbrother. And, given that these are farm folks in the 1960s, yes, there is even a lot of time devoted to saving the family farm.

Quotes {MJ’s family has had a rock thrown through a window, with a note attached and a swastika drawn on it. Her school is having an assembly to address the incident}

I looked for the friendliest face I could see. Until recently, I never would have seen him that way. But that face belonged to Hal. He nodded at me once, so I took it as a sign of permission to do what I felt I had to do.

I got up and calmly walked to the podium where the principal was standing. “Hi,” I said to him. “Is it okay if I say something, too?”

“Of course. It directly affects you, Mary Jacqueline.”

I looked out at the senior class. … “I bet it was really disappointing for you, to learn that none of us got hurt. …. Or maybe you planned it that way, because you didn’t want to face us. It’s easier to just write a note and throw a rock and draw a symbol that you don’t really understand.”

I shrugged. “Why should you care about my family? … the only Jewish person who lives in our house now—you know who that is? Huh? It’s me. It’s just me.”

I paused to look them all in the eye. “Or maybe you thought you’d catch Sid’s in-laws. Was that it? … you’re siding with the monsters who put numbers on their arms and murdered their families. And you’re against all those men—fathers of most of us here—who fought on D-Day. Instead, you decided to throw in your lot with the other side. … I’m sure you think you’re American. But you’ve decided you prefer our enemies.” I shook my head. I stood for a moment, trying to think of what else to say.

Hal ambled up and stood next to me. “I’m on your side, MJ,” he said.

I turned and looked out at the sea of faces again. “… you didn’t break us.”

Relationships for MJ Tanner

In essence, the entire book is all about her relationships. If I went into all of them, I would be writing until the heat death of the universe, heh. So, rather than going into overkill, here are a few that loom very large.

Jim Franklin

Given that MJ is a writer, the idea of her falling for the boy next door is a cliché. She even complains about that within the context of the story.

But once I had started to understand the character, and MJ started to understand him as well, I suppose we both came to the conclusion that he was the best person for her.

Levi and Chloe Franklin

MJ and Jim have twins when rubella (German measles) is at its worst. And Broken Arrow, being a tiny town, doesn’t get the MMR vaccine in time. The loss of anyone’s child will gut pretty much anyone. MJ is no exception.

Walt Tanner

Left to care for both MJ and his son Sid when MJ is fourteen, Walt is a much more hands-on father than the vast, vast majority of men of the time. But Walt is also straightforward and brooks no nonsense.

When MJ suffers heartache, he bluntly tells her that she brought it all upon herself.

Walt is also a lot more liberal and tolerant than most men of the day, particularly for that part of the United States.

But this makes sense, seeing as he marries a Jewish woman who he barely knows. When the draft for the Vietnam war threatens his son and stepson, he’s the one who suggests finding alternatives.

And those alternatives are supposed to be legal. But it feels very much like Walt would look the other way if they weren’t. When Walt passes, Jim says that MJ lets out a wail similar to that when the twins each died.

Lisette Bloch Tanner

MJ’s less than perfect mother is unconventional at best. At her worst, Lisette is irresponsible, particularly when she abandons the family (See, I told you there were spoilers in here. But did you listen? Hmm?).

Because MJ is so young when this happens, her first instincts are to try to keep in touch. And eventually, when the opportunity presents itself in a rather roundabout way, she goes to confront Lisette.

But the meeting between Lisette Bloch Kleinman and MJ Tanner isn’t a fight or a reckoning. Rather, it’s more of a cautious reunion and serves as a transition to the middle third of the book.

Graceanne Davis Mason Brown Tanner

MJ’s relationship with her stepmother does not start out well. But they grow on each other and eventually come to a deep understanding and even mutual love and affection.

Some of their understanding hinges on MJ getting along better with Graceanne’s son, Hal. But another aspect of it is Graceanne accepting that MJ and Sid are never going to convert, and she should just stop trying and accept them the way they are.

Sid Tanner

MJ’s brother is a sensible, down to earth accounting student who got their mother’s looks and, therefore, looks stereotypically Jewish. This has resulted in him having been bullied in school and threatened by antisemites.

But MJ, who essentially can ‘pass’ for gentile, does not suffer this until high school…

Hal Brown, Jr.

… Except for at the hands of Hal. When MJ meets her future stepbrother, he threatens her and refers to Sid by a slur. But MJ can hold her own and kicks him in the shins before running to tell Walt.

And, because Hal demands that MJ do his homework for him, MJ asks Walt and Graceanne if she can be paid to tutor Hal, figuring she may as well make some money off him.

But tutoring Hal turns out to be harder than it would appear at first blush, as he is dyslexic and likely also has a degree of autism and/or ADHD. Being able to reach and truly help him leads to them finally being able to bury the hatchet.

Will Tanner

When Graceanne and Walt have a son together, MJ is of the ideal age to babysit. It being the mid-1960s, she entertains the baby by singing along to the songs on the radio, including Wooly Bully.

Ariel Kleinman

I don’t have a lot on MJ and Ariel’s direct relationship. The half-sister from Lisette’s second marriage is part of the glue that holds this whole patchwork family together.

The Brady Bunch, they ain’t.

The OG Snowy and Edge of Seventeen Snowy

Two of MJ Tanner’s most important relationships are with two separate dogs. The original (OG) Snowy is her heart dog, and she feels as deeply for him as she does for her human family.

The Edge is the seventeenth dog her family names Snowy. And while he’s not quite her heart dog, he’s almost a reincarnation of the original.

Conflict and Turning Point

With several turning points in the overall story, there are several for MJ.

Probably the three biggest are when her mother leaves, when she defends Graceanne, and when Addison Acreage threatens the farm.

The secondary three are most likely when MJ is first confronted with antisemitism, when she and Jim get together, and when she has to start facing her own mortality.

There are more, and then whole story really belongs to her. But those are some of the biggest conflicts and changes in her life.

Continuity/Easter Eggs

MJ shows up in the mega, massive crossover, Timelines are Alive with, of all people, her eventual brother-in-law, Joe Crowley, jr.

Future Plans for MJ Tanner

I’m not so sure that I have future plans for ole MJ. Without getting too heavily into spoiler territory, a lot of her life is already on the page.

MJ Tanner: Takeaways

I truly, madly, and deeply love this character.

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Self-Review – Dinosaurs

Let’s Look at Dinosaurs

Let’s take a look at Dinosaurs. In this case, I used the prompt term to mean ‘obsolete things or people’, rather than actual thunder lizards.

I wrote this story during the second quarter of 2018.

Background for Dinosaurs

With a bit of an eye toward, if I recall correctly, the book version of 2001, I wanted to show a kind of a metamorphosis, from a mechanical existence to a spiritual one.

In the future, a species starts to become more and more dependent upon machines for the necessities of life. I don’t mean to deliver groceries or to prepare medicine so much. Rather, I mean to help them walk, talk, eat, and even think.

It’s a little like some of the earlier parts of the old Zager and Evans hit, In the Year 2525.

Is that species ourselves? I never actually say so. But it most certainly could be.

You decide, sports fans.

Plot for Dinosaurs

There is not too much of a plot to this one. Rather, it is more of a description of what should feel a little like the next stage of our own development.

Or at least the next stage for the development of the Utromi from Mettle.

Characters

The characters are really just the people who have made it to the next, perhaps final, stage of their development. But there are no names, genders, ages, races, or any other identifying marks.

So, how do they tell one another apart? Frankly, I haven’t got the foggiest notion.

Memorable Quotes from Dinosaurs

You see them everywhere, if you look closely enough. The rusty, dusty hulks of what once was gleaming, new, beautiful, and important. You’re floating down a street and wham! You practically run into one of them. It’s a wonder they can move at all.

For us, things are different. We are strong and wise, gleaming and fantastic. We are superior to those dusty relics in every single way that counts, and probably in others that don’t count so much, too.

What is even more amazing and difficult to believe is that we once were them. There as a time when we were as faded and fragile and imperfect as they are now.

The change happens in all sorts of ways. There doesn’t seem to be any sort of a regular pattern to it. One day, you’re a dinosaur of a creature. The next day, you’re one of us, ethereal and opalescent. Or it takes longer, as your dull parts start to shine until you literally leave your old existence in the dust.

Rating

The story has a K rating. While the narrator is describing what by all rights should feel like death, the description is a joyous one. They welcome the changes, and hope others will as well.

Takeaways

I love how this one ends hopefully, that the inevitable death of a species can merely be the start of something new. You know, like the chrysalis brings forth the butterfly, even as the caterpillar thinks it’s the end of the world.

Perhaps the human race will be so lucky, eh? We can only hope.

And finally, Dinosaurs is on Wattpad, where you can read it in its entirety.


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Self-Review – Beacon: A Light Shines in Gloucester

Let’s Look at Beacon: A Light Shines in Gloucester

I write a lot of apocalyptic stories. In a way, they’re easier when you’re struggling to fulfill a personal commitment to write every single day. But the best part about Beacon: A Light Shines in Gloucester is that, unlike a lot of my post-apocalyptic stories, it’s actually hopeful.

This puts it in a class similar to Alix’s Apocalypse.

I wrote this story during the third quarter of 2021.

Background

The original prompt word was beacon. So, it immediately made me think of lighthouses. And, the closest lighthouse to my home is (I believe) in Gloucester, Massachusetts.

A Light Shines in Gloucester with the Plot

After an apocalyptic disaster, the unnamed narrator goes to Gloucester, Massachusetts, in order to occupy the lighthouse. They want to see what there is to be seen. And so, they hope, to be seen by someone else out there.

But there may not be anyone else.

Characters from Beacon: A Light Shines in Gloucester

The characters are just the narrator, and a stray dog they have named Sally. The narrator most likely is wholly unaware as to whether there are any other human beings alive at all on planet Earth.

As a result, the reader does not know this rather vital bit of information, either.

Memorable Quotes

When it all went to hell in a handcart, I escaped to Gloucester, to the old Annisquam Lighthouse. Built in 1801, I understand, and 45 feet tall.

I survived and my appetite came back. I headed into town and got supplies. Canned goods. Seeds. Boxed food. Rope. Batteries. Alcohol, of course.

Found a dog there. I guess she didn’t want to run off or was too old or too loyal. No collar. I’ve been calling her Sally.

Rating

The story has a K rating. While this short story is all about the aftermath of a truly horrific disaster, nothing untoward happens ‘on screen’ (as it were).

Takeaways for Beacon: A Light Shines in Gloucester

There is not very much to this one. And that is unfortunate, for I can see where this one does have some potential. After all, there is the very real possibility that the narrator could end up signaling someone (or some kind of a thing) that she most certainly does not wish to find.

Protect Sally at all costs!


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Self-Review – Scavenger Hunt at Lanterman’s Mill

Let’s Look at Scavenger Hunt at Lanterman’s Mill

Would you go on a scavenger hunt at Lanterman’s Mill? And where the heck is Lanterman’s Mill, anyway? Not to worry, dear reader. I will reveal all.

I started this story during the third quarter of 2021. But I did not finish it until the first quarter of 2025. Or maybe early in the second quarter of 2025.

Background for Scavenger Hunt at Lanterman’s Mill

The original prompt word was Youngstown. I’ve been to Ohio before, but never actually to Youngstown. And so, I had to open up Google maps and try to figure out what would be interesting enough in the town to write about.

Also, I love cryptic crosswords, so the idea of making a cryptic clue was a lot of fun! Did you guess what ‘shift maternalism, almost nil’ means (see below)?

Plot

It’s a cool ten million dollars at stake when Liz and her family go on a scavenger hunt sponsored by a hardware store. And when Liz finds… something, tempers start to flare.

Characters

The characters are Liz Crosby (the narrator), her brother in law Chuck Rafferty, her nephew Wesley, Chuck’s pal Jerry Nance, and Jerry’s second wife, Lisa Foster Nance. Liz mentions her sister Natalie and infant niece Deirdre, but they aren’t along for the scavenger hunt.

There’s also Mike Rawlings, the CEO of the hardware store. And Penny Delgado, from Youngstown Action News.

Memorable Quotes

This is the stupidest scavenger hunt I’ve ever been on. And I’ve been on quite a few.

It’s not the old town
Water takes a trip
Shift maternalism, almost nil
The bridge wears a hat
The gorges are gorgeous

I figured out it was Youngstown, Ohio. But the gorge clue made the rest of my team think Ithaca. So, they’re there, and I’m here.

But I have no idea about the water. I guess it means a creek or a river or stream. If it’s a river, then it’s the Mahoning. And after that, I’m stumped—100%, totally, grade A stumped. This sure is a lot of work for $10 million.

Rating

The story has a K rating.

Takeaways from this Scavenger Hunt

While everyone else is going nuts in one way or another, Liz manages to keep her cool. But maybe a little unnaturally. If I ever really revisit this one, I may add an instance or two where even Liz becomes unraveled. Hmm.


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Self-Review – Stellar Stowaway

Let’s Look at Stellar Stowaway

The idea of a stellar stowaway is kind of irresistible to me. And I may revisit it. But not necessarily as a continuation of, or a prequel to, this particular plot.

I wrote this story during the first quarter of 2021.

Background

The original prompt was the word miracles. I had done enough bible fan fiction (hello, The Field Gleaner and The Great Cleanup!), and I wanted something different.

Well, I sure as hell got something different.

Plot for Stellar Stowaway

Characters

The characters are the narrator, their unnamed benefactor, and the other members of the alien crew.

Memorable Quotes

I really didn’t think anyone would make it out of there alive. And for it to be me? Well, that’s just weird. I am not ungrateful; it’s more that I’m just kind of puzzled.

I have no idea if any other humans got out. And I realize I have probably leapt from the frying pan to the fire.

For this is a ship, and it’s moving, and I have no idea where. When I was a kid, I got lost near Trevi Fountain. I was terrified I’d be lost on an unfamiliar continent, forever.

Now, I may end up lost in another star system, and maybe forever.

Rating for Stellar Stowaway

The story has a K+ rating. Nothing terrible happens to the narrator. But all along, you know that it just… might.

Takeaways

The fact that someone is helping out the narrator is of course a cause for some hope. But the rest of it is just weird. To me, right now, it just kind of falls flat.

Ah, well, they can’t all be great. Although a species that looks a lot like Ken dolls could be… interesting. In an uncanny valley sort of way, that is. Eek!


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Self-Review – Frozen Fortress

Let’s Look at Frozen Fortress

Frozen Fortress may very well be related to some memory of the film, On the Beach. The one with Ava Gardner and Fred Astaire, not the one with Rachel Ward.

It’s probably also a small bit about the 1980 film Virus, where a small number of survivors are living on an ice station.

I wrote this story during the second quarter of 2021.

Background

The original prompt word was icicles. I originally thought of Hitchcock, but also about what it would be like if we had to fight an enemy, but we couldn’t light anything on fire.

Plot

When the planet is invaded by aliens who love the heat, the people of Earth scramble to try to figure out some way to repel the invasion. When virtually every weapon is based on heat and fire, options are scarce.

Characters

The characters are the nameless narrator and their colleague, Jack Slade.

Memorable Quotes from a Frozen Fortress

When I joined the research station on the shores of the Ross Sea, I expected it would last for maybe two years at most. I never expected it would be for the rest of my days. Or anyone else’s, for that matter. Yet here we are.

The invasion started at the equator. They liked the heat—it was obvious. It took a while for the Earth’s governments and military to figure out how to at least try to use that data to our advantage.

But it’s hard when your main options are fire-based. The first time we nuked them, they just came back all the stronger. It was as if we had sent them a gift basket, or a catered meal.

We had no real way to propel anything frozen at them. An ice bullet? It all just melted.

I came here originally to study penguins. Now we’re fighting to stay alive and afloat.

Rating

The story has a K+ rating. While the story is technically about war, there isn’t a lot of that on screen.

Takeaways from the Frozen Fortress

I think the premise to this one is pretty sound. It just kind of stops cold (no pun intended, I swear!).

So, this could very well be the kind of story I could do something with in the future. Hmm…


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Self-Review – The Field Gleaner

Let’s Look at The Field Gleaner

This story, The Field Gleaner, is kind of a little bit of biblical fan fiction, I guess you could call it. But unlike in The Great Cleanup, the narrator is on her own. I based her on Ruth. But she’s not quite Ruth, not really.

I wrote this story during the first quarter of 2021.

Background

When I was in Hebrew school, one of the few things I can recall learning was about gleaning. It was essentially an Iron Age form of charity. A landowner would deliberately not harvest a certain amount of the crops and leave them for the poor people to pick.

The original prompt word was linear.

Plot of The Field Gleaner

The main character has a kind of employment, where she picks wheat for the owner of the fields. Newly freed from bondage, she has no other skills and no other prospects. All alone, she’s just doing what she can to survive.

Characters

The characters are the unnamed narrator. But I based her on the biblical matriarch Ruth.

Memorable Quotes

There is a straight path, and it leads to fields. I pick wheat for the owner. And, in return, he lets me glean. For I am poor, you see. It wasn’t until very recently that I stopped being a slave.

My labor is hard, but at least it ends at night. The women who are married, I know their workday is just getting started when the sun goes down. There are husbands and children to feed, and floors to be swept.

But me, I sleep under the stars. It’s often cold. I’ve been rained on more times than I can count.

But I am free, and I sweep no one’s floors.

Rating

The story has a K rating.

Takeaways from The Field Gleaner

I like the narrator’s optimism. Because even though her life is clearly rather difficult, she still manages to find some areas where she’s better off than others. This measure of grace allows her to find gratitude, even under trying circumstances.


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Self-Review – I Trade This For My Life

Let’s Look at I Trade This For My Life

If I recall correctly, the original title for I Trade This For My Life was Message Me If You Want a Samovar. But then I realized I liked that one better for the name of a section of Babel 2.0.

In addition, I didn’t want the absurdity of the Samovar title to detract from the more serious tone of the piece.

I wrote this story during the first quarter of 2021.

Background

This short story did not have an original prompt word. At least, I do not think it did.

My main idea for this one was the whole Anna Anderson bit. The idea of anyone having survived the shooting of the Russian royal family is, well, preposterous on its face.

But the story persisted, probably because it was catnip for editors of tabloids searching for a juicy story.

For the imposter’s part (her real name was evidently Franziska Schanzkowska), she was convincing to some. But for others, she was likely a useful idiot. At least, that’s what they may have thought.

And so, during her life, she received some information on the royal court. This was from people who were, most likely, hoping to get in on the rumored missing fortune of the Tsars.

As a result, Schanzkowska was able to sound convincing to a lot of other people. And so, the rumors persisted. Schanzkowska seems to have crashed on a lot of famous people’s couches.

But not everyone believed this almost real-life Talented Mr. Ripley.

Plot for I Trade This For My Life

Since the real Anna Anderson was inevitably shown to be a fraud, this story either serves as pure fiction or as a bit of how she fooled so many people for so long.

Characters

The characters are Anna Anderson (who was allegedly Anastasia Romanov) and whoever she is talking to.

Memorable Quotes

They say it’s a revolution, but I know it’s really just an angry mob. They pounded on doors, broke through windows, and grabbed anyone and everything they could.

My father. My mother. And my sickly little brother. My sisters. All gone.

Rating

The story has a K rating.

Takeaways for I Trade This For My Life

What I’ve got right now isn’t much of a story at all. Rather, it’s a lot more like a fragment. Could I really do something with it? I suppose I could. But then again, the fiction might end up nowhere near as fascinating and strange as the fact!


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