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Writing Better Dialogue

Writing Better Dialogue

Better dialogue can elevate any piece. And it can even help to salvage a bad or otherwise forgettable piece of writing. Consider, for example, the works of Aaron Sorkin or Robert Altman. While these are examples from television and film, they should give an idea.

Sorkin is known for excellent dialogue, from such films as The Social Network and TV shows like The West Wing. However, Altman’s fame comes more for overlapping dialogue, from films like Nashville, M*A*S*H, and McCabe and Mrs. Miller.

Word Choice

Consider your characters’ educational levels. A college graduate will, in general, use longer and more complex and subtle words versus a high school dropout.

This does not necessarily mean one is smarter than the other, I might add. Hence consider who says prior to instead of before, or automobile rather than car.

Because that will help the reader to define who is speaking if you are more or less consistent with who uses the ten dollar words, and who does not. Click to buy Untrustworthy on Amazon

Affectations, Accents, and Pet Names

While I don’t want to get into accents again, you should consider regional dialects and regionalisms.

A sandwich on a long roll is a grinder in Massachusetts and Rhode Island, but it’s a hoagie in Philadelphia, a po’boy in New Orleans, and a sub in New York.

So, if your characters are from Queens, you’d better have them call it a sub unless they’re messing around or are copying someone from out of town.

Pet name usage can be extremely helpful in writing. When you write a couple, you may find you are writing a ton of dialogue between them. And it can get boring to constantly write he said, she said, so you can usually drop that after the first trade of words.

However, you may need to pick that up again after a while if you think the reader will get lost.

And it could be that they can really get lost if your couple is of the same-sex variety. However, if one person calls the other one snookums, and the other doesn’t use pet names or just says darling, then the reader gets a clue when you use those terms.

Just be consistent and your readers will thank you.

Takeaways

Listen to people talk whenever you can, and try to read your dialogue aloud. If you can get a friend to help you, even better. Because if your sentence is a tongue twister for you, then it is for your character (and, by extension, your readers as well).

Unless you meant to do that.

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Bechdel Test in Writing

A Look at the Bechdel Test

You may have heard the term—Bechdel test—but what the heck is it?

What is the Bechdel test?

The Bechdel test is best defined by the Bechdel site:

… sometimes called the Mo Movie Measure or Bechdel Rule is a simple test which names the following three criteria: (1) it has to have at least two women in it, who (2) who talk to each other, about (3) something besides a man. The test was popularized by Alison Bechdel‘s comic Dykes to Watch Out For, in a 1985 strip called The Rule. For a nice video introduction to the subject please check out The Bechdel Test for Women in Movies on feministfrequency.com.

Okay, But What Does it Really Mean?

Films have shortchanged women for decades. How so? It’s less in the area of leads versus supporting and bit players.

If a female main character is hurt, and the female doctor character treating her has a nametag, and they discuss the main character’s injuries, voila! The film passes the Bechdel test. Make that throwaway character male, and the opportunity is lost.

The test is not necessary for cinema, and it is certainly not necessary for prose. However, it’s still a helpful gauge.

Societal Changes That Can Help

When casting directors only look at men for a doctor character, a film loses an opportunity to pass. And when writers only think of male characters for a lawyer role, a book loses an opportunity to pass. Or when a playwright decides the murderer can only be male, guess what happens?

This is not to say that every single one of these characters must be female. But consider this.

A Fer-Instance

Let’s take two aspiring actors, Kate and Dave. They each try out for a minor character, a dog walker.

But the casting director insists the character must be male, even when there’s no good reason to have this requirement. The dog walker isn’t a love interest. They’re just a minor, bit part. But with the requirement, Dave gets the part. Not Kate.

Dave also gets a SAG card, and becomes part of the union. The union helps him find more work, and for better conditions and pay. He rises through the ranks, getting juicier roles with more dialog.

Over the years, his name moves up in screen credits. And he becomes familiar to casting directors. They may even ask for him when casting an everyman.

Dave also makes friends in the industry. They don’t just make it easier to get jobs. They also make it easier to deal with a rejection, because they’ve been there, done that.

He’s not going to be a lead actor. But he will get more and better parts, and can become a character actor. He might even be the answer to a trivia question—remember that guy who played the dog walker in ___?

The Other Side of the Coin

Remember Kate? She didn’t get the part. So, she gets a job waiting tables, like so many aspiring actors before her have done. She makes okay money but will always have to have a roommate to be able to afford to live anywhere near LA.

Her pals aren’t in the industry. They’re the waitstaff and maybe some of the patrons of the café where she works.

It’s hard, exhausting work, and she often doesn’t have the time or the energy to go on auditions. With an unpredictable schedule, she loses out on some opportunities because she has to work.

So, she looks for better work. But since food service is all she knows how to really do, her job search stays in that industry.

Over the years, she takes better jobs in more upscale restaurants. And she even switches from waitress to hostess, which is a little less exhausting. But only a little.

Kate still has less time to audition, and to rehearse—and to maintain her looks and her figure. Her auditions are big cattle calls, and the older she gets (yes, Hollywood sexism is alive and well), the smaller her chances of success become.

But she makes it a few times, and eventually gets her SAG card. But she’s lost about 5, maybe even 10 years versus Dave. Acting isn’t her job; it’s a side gig. But for Dave, it’s pretty much all he does.

Flip the Script

Of course, one part for one actress isn’t going to change the industry one way or another. And it doesn’t explain how and why the industry is the way it is. But multiply this by hundreds if not thousands of roles.

If things don’t change, Kate will run into this problem throughout her career, such as it is. There will be casting calls she’ll never bother with, because of this level of exclusion.

Or, they just plain will not be worth it, particularly if she has to lose a day’s pay just to try out for a role where there are no guarantees that she would get it.

Dave, on the other hand, experiences none of this.

Kate doesn’t have to get every single part out there. But once the people doing the hiring nix the gender requirement, a door cracks open for her. Just like Dave, she can get a SAG card. Getting it earlier means she has more chances to make money and to make an impression.

And, because Hollywood ageism is also a thing, she has more chances to succeed during what are likely to be her peak earning years.

Even if she still waits tables and treats acting as a hobby or a side gig, she’ll have more opportunities, and can potentially make enough to stop needing a roommate—or fund her eventual retirement.

Now, let’s look at my own efforts herein.

Walking the Walk

Consider the following. These are bits of my prose. These are the points where my first three NaNoWriMo novels passed. First off is a sentence from the Untrustworthy book, and it is the first dialogue that anyone says. It is in the first chapter, page 1.

“Good morning, Ixalla,” Tathrelle said.

And the second one is from The Obolonk Murders. It is in the first chapter, page 3. Selkhet (who is a female robot) is speaking to the main character, Peri Martin.

“Oh, that’s nothing,” said Selkhet.

Finally, the third is from The Enigman Cave. It is in the first chapter, page 3. The speaker is the main character, Mariana Shapiro.

“Yeah, Astrid? Can you patch me through to Jazzie and Trixie?”

The Point of the Bechdel Test

I don’t pretend to always write stellar prose. Yet all three of these works pass the test. And all of them do so within chapter one. Rather than making the reader dig, I lay it all out quickly.

For other writers, though, it may be more difficult. Lewis Carroll takes longer to bring Alice together with someone female with a name. And even then, the character’s name is ‘The Red Queen’.

But does that count? Beyond the name question, does it count because Alice is a child and therefore probably would not be talking about men?

And what happens if the piece is about lesbians? If they discuss the objects of their affections, does it count? Or… not?

The Bar is Set Low

Talk about setting a low bar! The two women don’t need to be strong. They do not need to be intelligent. A film or book can pass the test if two named women discuss crocheting. Not that there’s anything wrong with that.

However, my point is, passing the test doesn’t automatically turn anyone smart. Or kick ass. Or anything else. Instead, it just means two named female characters spoke, however briefly. And their subject, however briefly, was not a man.

Hell, they could even be two slaves discussing the quality of their chains.

But hey, it’s something. And it’s necessary. Good lord, is it ever. Because the last thing we need in the indie writing community is people writing about “Girl 4”.

But when two named female prisoners discuss the food in the prison, the work passes. Still, it’s not exactly feminism-friendly.

Return to Prose

Let’s go back to my three examples. The speakers in the Untrustworthy book are married to each other. The ones in The Obolonk Murders and The Enigman Cave are colleagues.

While Selkhet is subordinate to Peri Martin, and Astrid is to Mariana Shapiro Chase, they are still addressed respectfully. Just as relevant, the interactions are professional ones.

However, Mariana is more informal than Selkhet. But that is the way I write Marnie (Mariana).

Do the interactions have to be meaningful? Not really. The character Ixalla and her wife Tathrelle could be beating each other for all the reader knows. At least, given the one sentence, above.

Maybe Peri smashes Selkhet to bits right after the above statement. Maybe Mariana fires Astrid.

So the test doesn’t ‘fix’ any of that. It doesn’t guarantee heroic characters. It just guarantees names and the power of speech. And they, at least one time, don’t talk about a man.

More Issues with the Bechdel Test

The test is imperfect. It’s very hard to pass it when writing historical fiction. Of course female characters in the past could have names. They could speak of something other than men. But the time and place will dictate something else.

In the 1860s and 1880s (for example), men drive most of the action outside the home. But that’s not sexism; it’s reality. Still, since Scarlett O’Hara and Prissy discuss Melanie Hamilton Wilkes’s baby, then yes, Gone With the Wind passes. So it’s not impossible. It’s just tougher.

With The Real Hub of the Universe, Ceilidh O’Malley and Frances Miller Ashford sometimes discuss work or the like. When the action shifts to Ireland, Ceilidh and her mother, Mary, talk about finances.

So, it can be done. It helps when the women are relatives or they room or work together.

Contrast this with Time Addicts. Josie James‘s boss, Carmen D’Angelo, is female. So we’re already part-way there.  When they discuss time travel or universe changes, the story passes. Making the main antagonist female helps with this as well.

Takeaways

Creating well-realized female characters means naming them. It means having them speak. And it also means giving them more than one subject. It means giving them something, anything to do.

And it means not defining them by how others perceive or ignore them.

After all, when was the last time you thought a male character should only be discussing relationships? When was the last time you thought he shouldn’t have a name (unless the character is truly minor, seen for a paragraph or two and no more)?

And when was the last time you thought it was okay—barring any specific all-distaff settings like sororities or women’s colleges—to not see more than one of them in a piece?

If any of those are a problem for you, then you know what the Bechdel test is really about. And you know your work should easily pass it without having to tie itself in knots.


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Is There Really a Writers’ Blog Community?

Background – Writers’ Blog Community

Do you mean to say there’s an actual writers blog community?

Well, there kind of is. People like me blog all the time. And there are other writers who blog less often but I should be including them. Even if they don’t truly keep to a blogging schedule or anything like that.

However, the real issue is, there isn’t a whole helluva lot of connection.

Islands in the Stream…♪♫

With all the apologies to Dolly Parton and the late Kenny Rogers, the truth is that any sort of a blog community for writers is horribly fractured. Hell, the term community is a bit of a misnomer in this area.

Now, it is possible to find something resembling such a community. In fact, there are a few decent communities for writers, and NaNoWriMo is one of them.

There are also offline groups, such as with MeetUp, but that doesn’t really solve the blogging issue, now, does it?

So, one of the things that has surprised me the most while doing research about this is that so few writers actually blog about writing. And I am not even so sure that they blog about anything. Which is a pity, and feels kind of weird.

There are also instructional blogs about writing. With the exception of Chuck Wendig, the links on that list are either educational or semi-promotional. And while Mr. Wendig is somewhat promotional, at least he does not make it the focus of his blogging. No one should. Because let’s face it, no one wants to read one long infomercial about your books.

Yes, even your books.

The Writer’s Journey, in Blog Form

Apart from, well, Adventures in Career Changing (that’s here, of course), I cannot seem to find something like that. You know, where the blogger covers a lot more of the journey from wannabe to frustrated writer to querying to acceptance to publication. Or maybe not to querying, but instead to going the indie route and self-publishing.

But that specific journey or at least meandering line doesn’t get coverage in the blogosphere. Or if it does, then hell if I know where it is.

It is somewhat easy to find help and I even offer some as I can. But there don’t seem to be a lot of blogs out there on the sheer process of querying. And the process of creating, for that matter.

How many bloggers look at their own stories with a critical eye? How many share their disappointments? And how many writing blogs cover connections among stories?

But you can always find blogs about outlining, or finding an agent, or setting up indie publishing.

Where Are You?

Excuse me. Where the hell are you???

Is there anybody else out there who is doing what I am doing? If you’re out there, you are making it rather difficult for someone like me to find you! Which means you just might want to rethink your SEO strategy.

Seriously.

And I swear, I want to find these folks. It’s not that I don’t want to learn even more about the writing business and self-publishing. Of course I do! But I also think that niche is covered extremely well already.  My niche is different.

I would also put Dayton Ward into the category of writer journey blogger. But only kinda, sorta, as he also writes a lot about fandom. Not to say that I never meander.

Still, I just plain cannot believe that it’s just him and me. Seriously folks? That’s crazy if it’s just … us.

I have a lot of trouble believing the entire world of writer journey bloggers can fit in the back seat of my (rather small) car.

Starting a Community

Maybe it’s up to me (or maybe Dayton and me, I dunno) to start one. And maybe it’s not meant to be. But I do not give up that easily. And, I think it could be helpful. If absolutely nothing else, then it can be Commiseration City. Population: all of us.

I cannot possibly be the only person wondering why such a thing does not, seemingly, exist.

Er, can I?

Blog Community Takeaways

I first set off looking for a community of bloggers. And I found a lot of instructions and not much else. For my fellow writers in the trenches, I hope we can start to find each other. We probably already know one another one places like Facebook or Bluesky. But what about the blogosphere? Why aren’t there more folks here?

Writing can be an extremely isolating thing to do. A voice calls out in the darkness. Is there anyone to hear it?

Maybe… you?

Maybe we could all just create a writers blog community… together. #amblogging #amwriting


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Easter Eggs

Let’s Look at Easter Eggs in My Writing

Ah, Easter eggs. Those fun little nuggets of connection between stories.

What and how do utterly unrelated items have in common? And how does a sly wink at the reader keep the sense of disbelief from crashing down?

Well, it doesn’t always.

Easter Eggs: A Fun Nod to the Reader

This is the way I have always looked at these.

If I can have a little fun, then I hope that you can as well.

And the best part is, this not something I came up with on my own. These have a proud and long tradition in writing. So, I am far from being the first ever person to do this.

What They Are

For me, the concept behind Easter eggs is to add a little dash of something which is in hiding and hard for some to know.

I see it as almost like, if you have been paying attention, then you will see this and this, here and here.

What They Aren’t

Except for the linking between the various trilogies in the Obolonk universe, these are just meant to be a bit of fun. As such, I do not mean for everyone named Shapiro to be related to everyone else. They aren’t.

Also, not every reference to Boston is right next door to any of the other references. And not every hint actually, well, goes anywhere.

In addition, a matching genre does not constitute one of these. After all, both Stranger in a Strange Land and any Star Trek tie-in novels are all under the science fiction umbrella. But that does not mean they tie together with each other.

And so in the same way, consider that the numerous Boston or Shapiro references do not always signify a connection.

It’s more that I like to throw them in and then see if the reader gets it.

And you, dear reader, I am quite sure that you do.

I Really Should Call Them Afikomens

I am, after all, Jewish. Eh, you know what I’m talking about. I suppose either can and will do.

Easter Eggs (or afikomen) are just my way of saying “hi” to the reader. So, hi!


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How to Create a Writer Website: Writer Website User Experience Design

Whether you’re just starting or are updating an older author website, writer website user experience design is something you must consider.

Fer realz, yo’.

How Writer Website User Experience Design Can Help or Hurt You

Do yourself an enormous favor, and Google the placement office at your alma mater. If you didn’t go to college, then any local college or university will do. The name might be something like career development.

I am a ridiculous overachiever and have the oddest resume you are ever going to see. So, I have three alma maters, heh. Let’s look at them in turn (but what does this have to do with writer website design, I hear you cry. Trust me, you’ll see).

Boston University

The BU Center for Career Development has of course changed a lot since I graduated. Which was before a lot of people were born, 1983. Heh.

Colors are bold and it’s pretty easy to find stuff. BU also knows their audience. It’s a large university, over 100 years old, and has a variety of schools.

Just appealing to undergraduates would alienate alumni returning to look for work. Still, there’s no doubt that undergraduates are the main focus. If I wanted to look for work via BU, I would probably go straight to their alumni association—yet there’s no link or suggestion thereof.

I’m just left to founder.

Well, that kinda stinks.

I’d give BU a 3/5. What is there is very easy to read and navigable. But they are utterly neglecting a good chunk of their audience, and not even giving us an escape hatch.

Widener Law School (Delaware Campus)

The Widener Career Development Office has a rather different focus, as there are no undergraduates. There are certainly undergrads at Widener, but they aren’t at the law school.

And, the jobs the Widener office is going to send people to will inevitably either be private practice, JAG Corps (the military), or something academic.

There may be a few government agency jobs sprinkled in there. Also, because it’s a regional type of school, jobs will most likely be in Pennsylvania, Delaware, and New Jersey.

There may be a few in Maryland or New York. And if there are any federal jobs, then they’ll be in DC. But if you want to work in Indiana, you’re out of luck.

Notice anything else?

The font is larger than it was for BU, and it’s a serif font, whereas BU was sans serif.

Widener knows their audience is older, certainly at least about 20 years old (more likely to be closer to 25 at the youngest), whereas BU may have some audience members as young as 16.

Also, Widener probably figures most people will read their site on a laptop or desktop. At BU? Tablets or phones.

I’d give Widener a 2/5. While it does account for user age and perhaps sensibilities, I didn’t see any way to get to any jobs! You have to click on students before you get to any place with jobs. If you click on alumni, the message is about mentoring and recruiting.

Hence the assumption is, you’ve already graduated so, you don’t need to look for work. Would that it were so easy, Widener.

Quinnipiac University

The QU Career Development Office is a lot more image-heavy. It’s another sans-serif site, and the font is smaller, like for BU. There isn’t a lot of information on the front page, but that’s by design.

Rather, you scroll down and you’re given a choice of six schools and their College of Arts and Sciences. You can go straight to the appropriate placement office from there. But once there, there’s not a lot beyond telling you to contact the director.

While there are listings to tell you where people have landed, you have no names or contact info. So, knowing someone ended up at Apple, for example, is lovely. But, what does that have to do with the price of tea in China?

As an alum, I had to back out of the CDO and go to the home page for QU, click on alumni and then on career development, and then, finally, job postings.

And then I had to choose QUCC or an external link that ended up not working. Not a good look, QU.

I would give QU a 3.5/5. Triaging people by school was smart, but there was no accommodation for us older folks who might have less than stellar eyesight.

Writer Website User Experience Design is About Accommodations

For all three schools, the web developers did a decent job with functionality. Nothing was slow. Yet there were places where all three could improve.

Hiding what the readership was looking for was a problem for all three schools. Seriously—when I go to a placement office, I want to see jobs. At the barest absolute minimum, there should have been a way to sign up for notifications or to get into the system.

And that information should have been front and center. It was a use case that all three schools missed entirely, the concept of an alum out of work or a student over the summer, who just wanted to look for a job. No talk of careers or callings or majors.

Just. A. Job.

What really irks me is that these schools all have good budgets. So, why didn’t they do any better?

The Writer Website User Experience Design on YOUR Author Website

Most of us indie writer types do not have access to any sort of a meaningful budget. And, if we do, it’s likely better spent on cover designs, editor services, and paying for hosting, or for swag and accommodations for events.

So, you’re probably not going to be doing any sort of user experience testing. But that does not mean you cannot perform some thought experiments. Come with me, if you will.

Buyer Personae

Who is your ideal reader? Who buys your stuff? And, if you’re not selling yet, who do you think would buy it? This is  beyond your family, close friends, and fellow authors doing trades.

Name this person, and give them a face. Give them demographics. Here’s mine.

Meet Amy Shapiro

Amy Shapiro is a science fiction fan who’s older than the standard college crowd but still somewhat identifies with them (she’s between 35 and 70). She is college-educated and probably has three or fewer children, if any. She’s either married or in a long-term relationship. Her sexuality is more likely to be straight but she might be bi.

Amy is Jewish although not strict and does not keep kosher. But she does see that depictions of people just like her tend to be one-dimensional.

Where are the Jews in space?Alicia Silverstone (to depict buyer persona Amy Shapiro), to illustrate writer website user experience design

Amy loves sci fi but she still finds it hard to see herself on the page or the screen. After a certain age, women fall off a cliff in Hollywood, Sigourney Weaver and Carrie Fisher notwithstanding.

She also wants something unique and different, and is willing to read a number of different kinds of plots.

Amy is comfortable with some sex scenes, even explicit, if they aren’t gratuitous. The same is true of violence, but gore makes her squeamish.

This image (from Wikipedia, so it’s a creative commons license and therefore okay to use) is of actress Alicia Silverstone, a nice Jewish gal who was born in 1976 and fits the model perfectly.

Use Cases Help Your Writer Website User Experience Design Straighten Up and Fly Right

I alluded to this already, but now let’s get more specific. A use case is essentially how you think a person will use a particular product or service.

Of course, people who buy books intend to eventually read them. So, I’m not talking about use cases for books. Rather, I mean use cases for your writer website.

Writer Website User Experience Design — Appropriate Use Cases

Why do people go to author websites?

What do they want to accomplish? What can they get there and nowhere else, online or off?

I believe the following use cases exist for my site. Most of them probably do for yours (or will) as well:

1. Customers who want to buy my books
2. Fellow indie writers (just like you!) who want to discuss and learn about the craft
3. Fans looking to personally connect to me
4. People who want to learn about using social media and some web design (mostly intersects with #2, but not 100%)

Buyers

This is a group who, I will be first to admit, I am not serving well. But they’re the easiest to serve. They need links to buy, a shopping cart, ways to pay, and a means to check out and go home (figuratively) happy.

Craft Discussers

These are people I serve with posts like this, but also posts about inspiration, plotting, editing, and beta reading.

Fans (hi!)

For fans, the more personal ways I serve them are with self-reviews and progress reports. They want to know what I’m working on, and I like to think they want to know how I feel about that as well.

Social Media/Web Design Students

Posts just like these serve this group. So do a lot of the book reviews I’ve done over the years. I’ve read a ton of books on social media, etc. These folks want to know if those reads are worthwhile.

Takeaways for Writer Website User Experience Design

I know Amy is a buyer/fan, or at least I would like her to become one if not both. To better serve her, I need to set up sales, a thing I have not done yet.

Here are takeaways for you:

1. Consider your ideal reader/customer and how you can appeal to them
2. Why do you believe they are coming to your author website? Offer them what they want and need

3. Take the time to determine who your ideal buyer persona really, really is (yes, I’m repeating myself, but it’s that important)

Who’s your Amy?Click to buy Untrustworthy on Amazon


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How to Create a Writer Website: Mobile Design

No matter how much you may be used to using a laptop or a desktop computer to go to websites, that does not mean your website visitors will do the same. You have got to take mobile design into consideration.

Good Mobile Design is Imperative Because Phones are Everywhere

It is not just that they’re everywhere. It’s that so many people use their phones to surf the internet.

Statista says, in 2020, the number of mobile phone search users in the United States was 211 million. And, in 2020, according to the US Census, there were 311 million people in America. Note: the census data is for April 1, 2020, which is around when Covid started to really hit.

But you say there are 100 million people not using cell phones for search. Yep.

But there are very young children and very old folks in that group of 100 million. There are people who are comatose, and people who don’t understand how to use a cell phone.

Plus there are folks who don’t have cell phones at all, and people who would use a phone for search but don’t want to use data on a limited plan.

So, they’re not all die-hards who are digging their heels in and refusing to use their phones for search.

Oh, and consider that there are parts of the world where phones are a lot more popular than computers. Lots of Asia is like that. If your readers are there, then you really need to be working on mobile design for your author website.

But it’s More Than Just Search

What happens after you find something online? On occasion, you might take note of it or bookmark a page. But the vast majority of the time, you go to that site.

What if your site looks awful? And not just in a design way. Rather, in an unusable way.

To be fair, this article from Search Engine Journal is from 2013. I would hope most of the offenders would have pulled their socks up by now.

But the image below isn’t just of a lousy mobile design experience. It is also, it would appear, a site which hasn’t been updated since (a conservative estimate here) 1987.

Search Engine Journal example of bad mobile design
Search Engine Journal example of bad mobile design – please, make the pain stop!

That’s … pretty dang terrible.

It All Goes Together in a Great, Big Design Stew

So, the metaphor (or is it a simile?) sounded better in my head, okay?

Yet the principle is still there. That is, that a writer website has got to have good overall design and navigation.

But it also needs to provide a good user experience.

And it also must serve mobile search well.

Thank God for WordPress

No, seriously, they don’t pay me. I just think they’re pretty dang awesome.

You can accomplish the overall design (of any sort) of a WordPress site through the use of themes.

A theme can make your site pop, or it can make it look odd if you pick a theme that doesn’t handle your kind of site well.

Fortunately, WordPress does their best to separate the wheat from the chaff. And, themes are searchable.

So, search for a theme that’s mobile-friendly.

You can run the search either within WordPress or on Google or Bing.

These are the terms you should use for your search:

mobile friendly WordPress themes free

You may or may not want to add the word responsive to that search. And adding the word light can be helpful as well. By that, I don’t mean light in color. I mean light on HTML usage.

The problem isn’t finding one of these themes. It’s in selecting the one that you believe will serve your needs the best. WordPress absolutely spoils you for choice.

Clickable Elements and Google Search Console and Mobile Design

Er, what?

I have seen this problem before, and on more than one website. Google Search Console is owned by Google and it is how (with notifications that can hit your email) it tells you if there are problems with your website—including in its mobile design.

One issue I have seen before is “clickable elements too close together”. Putting a bunch of anchored links close together on a post can potentially do that.

Take note of these errors if you see them, and work to fix them. Sometimes that means moving an image or a link.

But if it persists, you may want to shift to another mobile-friendly theme. And do the designer a favor and tell them! They may have a workaround you can use.

Takeaways for Writer Website Mobile Design

Here are three takeaways on author website mobile design:

1. More people than ever before are using their phones to surf the internet, search, and buy things—things like your books

2. WordPress has a ton of mobile friendly themes. If you don’t like one, you can always try another of over a hundred (thousand?) others
3. Google thinks Mobile First and will ding you if your site isn’t good for cell phone use—so fix any usability issues as soon after you learn of them as possible
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How to Create a Writer Website: Writer Website Design

If you’re going to have an author website, you should probably be looking at writer website design. Don’t leave it all to chance (like, er, some of us did, cough, cough).

Writer Website Design Can Help or Hurt You

Without getting into user experience (which will be the subject of a different blog post), there are definitely things you can do with writer website design that can help you.

Or hurt you.

And I will also write about designing for mobile in yet another blog post, so I will try not to get into that here too much, either.

So, rather, let’s talk about (er, it’s only me ‘talking’, but you know what I mean) organization.

Location, Location, Location

Have you ever gone to a website (and it does not have to be for an author) and looked for something, and it just plain wasn’t there? And it wasn’t that it was absent—which of course can happen to anyone in any site. Instead, it was just in some odd place.

It’s a little like finding salsa in the Italian foods section of your local supermarket.

Hey, I’m glad I found you, oh little jar of delicious salsa. But why aren’t you with your friends, the taco shells?

See what I mean?

Like Should be Together With Like

This is almost Marie Kondo level stuff.

Consider your book(s) and your blog posts, whether they are written (or even posted), or not. When you have had a blog for a while, you may need to add some menu navigation to the front page.

Let’s say, for sake of argument, that you write both horror and stuff for kids.

Er, don’t confuse the two.

You might call one menu The Spooky Nook, whereas you might call the other one Happy Books for Happy Tots. And never mind that it would likely be better if these were in two separate websites.

With WordPress, you would do this with categories, and with placing the menus where you feel they work the best.

Obviously, you make sure your horror goes to the former menu while your kids’ stuff goes to the latter.

But what about things that are in the middle? Or maybe they don’t really fit either?

First off, not everything must be in a drop-down menu format. So long as a blog post is accessible somehow, through a link on some other page, you’re good. The easiest way to make certain of that is to use tags.

Tags are for Aggregation. They Also Work as a Kind of Sneak Preview

Every time you make a tag, WordPress (and I believe Blogger may do this as well) creates a page. And, perhaps somewhere, a developer gets their wings.

But the idea behind tags isn’t to make a million of them for every occasion. Unlike with some other things, such as blog content (with exceptions), reusing is just fine. In fact, it’s downright necessary.

If your tags are visible in your theme, they will be clickable links. A site visitor will click on one, say, called children‘s books. If you are using the identical tag for all twenty (we can dream, now, can’t we?) of your children’s books, they will see everything you have on offer.

And, they might see something in your back catalog that they didn’t know about before. And may want to buy it.

But if the tag only points to one book, and another tag, called kids’ books, points to one different book, and another tag, preschoolers’ books, only points to a third book, do you see the problem here?

Your visitor has to go through three separate screens. For twenty books done up this way, you guessed it, they’re now saddled with having to go through twenty screens. Which is silly.

Is using synonyms good? It probably is, because you’re accounting for more than one type of search. The preschoolers’ books tag, in particular, is really good, because that’s a well-defined subset of children. Someone looking for a book for a teenager will know not to click there.

But how do you fit in synonyms without making visitors jump through too many hoops?

Tags are Your Friend but They are not Your Bestie

The simple solution is: use more than one tag. But at the same time, don’t go overboard. There is no need to dig through a thesaurus, hunting for obscure synonyms so you can make yet more tags.

But do some research, and that means pulling up Google and trying it out for yourself.

When you search for children’s books, how many hits do you get? Beyond the ads, what are the first three results? Now do the same for kids’ books. The day I wrote this blog post, I found children’s books (no quotes or anything) got me 884 million results.

But kids’ books got me 10.9 billion hits.

While the top three results were in slightly different orders, they overlapped. These sites are using both. You should, too.

But a search for the much more obscure striplings’ books got me books by author Scott Stripling. Not even close.

For a book on the kids’ side devoted to dinosaurs and easy to read, you might tag it something like:

kids’ books, children’s books, dinosaurs, easy reader

You might tag a book for children about divorce something like:

kids’ books, children’s books, divorce, separation

Depending on the second book’s focus, you might also tag it legal or mental health, etc.

But You Just Said Tags Aren’t Your Bestie

I sure did. What I mean by this is: getting too granular isn’t helpful because it won’t aggregate. Hence the book on dinosaurs just gets a dinosaurs tag and not a stegosaurus tag—unless you have enough books on the stegosaurus where it would justify it.

Being too tag-happy doesn’t look good. It just looks amateurish and spammy.

Use a half-dozen rule of thumb.

Therefore,

• No more than 6 tags per post and
† If you have 6 usages or planned usages for a tag, great! Otherwise, don’t make a new tag—but see below

Exceptions are of the Devil and We’d Better Deal With Them Now

A meaningful exception to the 6 usage rule is when a topic is so exceptionally unique that you can’t use another, similar tag as a replacement.

Case in point: the 50 states. Try as you may, putting the tag for Oklahoma on a blog post about Idaho is just weird and unnecessarily confusing. Or, you can avoid the issue entirely and just create a tag called America or USA or US states, something like that.

I would also say that a very long book (as in, over 100k words, edited) can get a few extra tags if it’s justified.

Here’s an example: my book, The Real Hope of the Universe. It’s the last book in the Real Hub of the Universe trilogy. Plus people love the main character, Ceilidh O’Malley.

Tags can probably look like (I haven’t checked mine, but they’re likely to be close to this):

Real Hub of the Universe, Victorian era, science fiction, Victorian sci fi, Ceilidh O’Malley, Jake Radford, Devon Grace

I may not need the two extra names at the end (they are also significant characters, but it’s Ceilidh’s POV all the way).

Easy, useful, and no overkill.

Odds and Ends for Writer Website Design

WordPress does this beautifully but, if you’re not using it, you should consider this.

Make sure all navigation is where the visitor would expect it to be. For example, settings and accounts tend to be in an upper corner. Putting them in the middle of a page is just asking for them to be ignored/unseen. Yes, even though they are quite literally front and center.

Keep buttons, etc. consistent and use naming conventions. For our children’s author example, boys’ books and girls’ books and nonbinary books go together. But books for boys (assuming the other two stay the same) is inconsistent.

If a website visitor finds your site via your nonbinary books page (or tag or category), they will reasonably guess that reading material for boys will be called something like boys’ books.

They’re a lot less likely to guess books for boys. You should, though, be using both terms on the page. But you only need the one tag like that.

Consistency and naming conventions will make your life easier, too. You only have to dream up the general concept one time.

Takeaways for Writer Website Design

Of course, there are many, many more things I could say about this. But here are three quick takeaways on the topic of writer website design:

• Do some research to find out which words people are using when searching for books and a site just like yours. Use those words as keyword phrases (covered in my SEO blog posts), blog titles, and category and tag names

† Keep in mind a rule of 6 for the number of tags per post and the number of times a concept repeats on your site before you create a tag for it—but be mindful of some exceptions
• Consistency and naming conventions will save you and your readers time
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How to Create a Writer Website: Writer Website Copyright

Even if you aren’t a litigious sort of person, you will still do well to concern yourself with writer website copyright. Just because you, personally, don’t go searching for plagiarism and copyright violations, doesn’t mean that they won’t find you.

Writer Website Copyright: The Basics

If any of this looks familiar, it’s because I have other posts on copyright. And, let’s face it. It really hasn’t changed that much. But it does bear repeating all the same.

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Copyright definition courtesy of Investopedia

The Elements of Copyright

According to the US Copyright Office,

Copyright is a form of protection provided by the laws of the United States (title 17, U.S.Code) to the authors of “original works of authorship,” including literary, dramatic, musical, artistic, and certain other intellectual works. This protection is available to both published and unpublished works.

Per Section 106 of the Copyright Act of 1967, a copyright holder can:

† reproduce the work in copies or phonorecords
• prepare derivative works based upon the work
† distribute copies or phonorecords of the work to the public by sale or other transfer of ownership, or by rental, lease, or lending
• perform the work publicly, in the case of literary, musical, dramatic, and choreographic works, pantomimes, and motion pictures and other audiovisual works
† display the work publicly, in the case of literary, musical, dramatic, and choreographic works, pantomimes, and pictorial, graphic, or sculptural works, including the individual images of a motion picture or other audiovisual work
• perform the work publicly (in the case of sound recordings) by means of a digital audio transmission

Hence copyright holders have any number of rights in their own works. Can they allow others to use them? You betcha! We call that a license.

When do Copyrights Expire?

Not surprisingly, the US Copyright Office has something to say about that.

In general, for works created on or after January 1, 1978, the term of copyright is the life of the author plus seventy years after the author’s death. If the work is a joint work with multiple authors, the term lasts for seventy years after the last surviving author’s death.

I won’t go into works created before January 1, 1978 (you can check out the pamphlet for that). Since it’s a good 45 years ago, many currently living authors don’t have anything that old.

Er, What?

What does this mean? Well, the short answer is that you generally do better to publish your work! After all, you can’t expect anyone to guard against copying it if they don’t know it exists.

The other important takeaway: you don’t need to assert copyright or mail it yourself or anything like that. Does it help to register your work? Absolutely! And you’ll need it to defend a lawsuit. But mailing it to yourself is silly. Seriously.

Infringement and Writer Website Copyright

We are artists and that means we are copyright holders, even if we never assert our rights and never file with the copyright office. According to American copyright law, you own it if you made it. You don’t have to mail it yourself.

But to defend a case, in the US, you must register your work. In fact, the registration is a prerequisite to actually taking someone to court for infringement. Thank you, copyright attorney extraordinaire, Michael Stewart!!

Infringement

Here, however, I will only talk about American law. If you assert copyright in another country, the law will most likely differ. Furthermore, if you have any questions, ask me in the comments section. I will try to research and answer you in a timely fashion.

But don’t expect me to do the huge amount of research a hired lawyer would. Nope. I am not doing that much free work for you, sorry, not sorry.

Or ask a copyright attorney. This area, like many areas of the law, has nuances and there can be changes. This blog is no substitute for good advice from an experienced lawyer. If you think you need to protect your rights, then do so properly. And that means hiring an attorney.

Yes, you will need to actually pay that person.

Details

The American Bar Association explains it better. It publishes a Young Lawyers series to help newly minted lawyers understand the nuances of complex sections of practice. So, the ABA explains:

An action for copyright infringement may arise where a third party violates one or more of the exclusive rights granted to copyright owners. To establish infringement, the plaintiff must prove: “(1) ownership of a valid copyright, and (2) copying of constituent elements of the work that are original.”

Ownership of a valid copyright consists of: “(1) originality in the author; (2) copyrightability of the subject matter; (3) a national point of attachment of the work, such as to permit a claim of copyright; (4) compliance with applicable statutory formalities; and (5) (if the plaintiff is not the author) a transfer of rights or other relationship between the author and the plaintiff so as to constitute the plaintiff as the valid copyright claimant.” A copyright registration certificate from the Copyright Office serves as prima facie evidence of elements (1) through (4). If the defendant rebuts the plaintiff’s prima facie evidence, then the above elements of valid copyright ownership become essential to the plaintiff’s case.

What Does that all Mean?

So what is the ABA is saying? Registration with the US Copyright office is necessary to successfully bring an infringement claim. If you think your work might be infringed upon, if you feel it is a danger and you are concerned about it, then get some peace of mind and register it with the US Copyright Office.

Are There Any Writer Website Copyright Exceptions? Or Any Copyright Exceptions?

I am so glad you asked.

Purdue University offers a terrific and very readable summary of the main known exceptions to copyright infringement claims.

Fair Use

For the fair use defense, Purdue outlines four basic factors:

Purpose and Character

Some specific use cases favor fair use. These include nonprofit, educational, and personal uses. Plus there are those which represent a potential tipping point.

These include teaching, research, scholarship, criticism, commentary, and news reporting. And there are those which favor needing permission. These include commercial, entertainment, and for-profit uses.

Hence, a nonprofit’s research is more likely to be fair use than a for-profit enterprise’s commercial use. Hence the for-profit business should seek the copyright holder’s permission.

Nature of Work

To favor fair use, it should be a fact and/or published. But to favor needing permission, it should be a fiction and/or unpublished.

E. g. It’s more likely to be fair use if you repeat a published fact about dinosaurs. Whereas you more likely need permission for an unpublished novel about vampires.

Amount

Small and insignificant bits of copying are more likely to be fair use than large ones representing a work’s heart. As a result, those are more likely to require permission.

Hence, if I copy the character of Millicent Bulstrode, then the character is minor and small. But this does not necessarily mean JK Rowling won’t sue me. Still, copying Hermione Granger is another matter entirely.

Market Effect

You’re more likely to be in the fair use realm if:

† Licensing/permissions are unavailable or there is no major impact,
• There is limited/restricted access to the work, or
† The user or institution owns a legal copy.

But it’s different if there is a major impact, or licensing/permissions are readily available. Or the work has worldwide availability, or there is repeated or long-term use. Then the scale slides to requiring permission.

Profit and sales are not an element to this cause of action. Although selling the copied article, particularly multiple instances of it, can place the act into the ‘requires permission’ camp.

Face to Face Instruction

According to Purdue,

The traditional classroom or face-to-face instruction is when the instructor and the students of a nonprofit educational institution are in a place devoted to instruction and the teaching and learning take place at the same time. In this setting all performances and displays of a work are allowed.

Requirements:

• All materials must be legally acquired.
† Teaching activities must take place in a classroom or a similar place devoted to instruction.

Exceptions: Virtual Instruction

Like face-to-face instruction allowance, virtual instruction generally gets a pass, per Purdue University. However, there are some specifics. For example, the class must be a regular offering in the curriculum.

What About Parody and Writer Website Copyright?

The American Bar Association notes the United States Supreme Court treats parody and satire separately. But the ABA feels it’s a distinction without much of a difference. Both are mockery. But satire is often more like commentary than outright mimicry.

For the ABA, and particularly when a work has both elements, the difference matters less. Although copyright holders might be more likely to license satire rather than parody. This is because parody is pretty much a knockoff by definition.

Commentary generally falls under fair use. That commentary can be amusing or not, satirical or not. Copying generally isn’t fair use. But amusement and exaggeration blurs that line.

The best advice I can give you is: don’t make your work into a copyright test case.

In other words: be original!

Writer Website Copyright: Takeaways

Beyond protecting your own work and trying not to get into your own copyright hot water, there is the matter of someone out and out pirating your stuff. This happens with annoying regularity. DMCA takedown notices can be semi-effective, but determined thieves likely will not care about your rights.

A few ways to protect yourself include using PDFs for review copies or beta reader copies, and not Word docs or Google docs. With those, copying is still possible, although you need software to do it.

If you are published through a publisher (traditional or hybrid), talk to their legal department about what they do, and how you can potentially help them. But if it’s just you, you may want to resign yourself to the fact that it can turn into just so much Whack-a-Mole.

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How to Create a Writer Website: Writer SEO

No one will know about your awesome writer website if you don’t start to pay attention to writer SEO.

And without all the connections on your website you could be making, guess what happens? You miss will out on sales. And you may also miss out on places where you can appear and promote your book. Or libraries where you can have your book.

Note: this is an overview and not the details of any form of SEO, even writer SEO. That would take up a few hundred blog posts at least.

Why Does Writer SEO Matter?

Have you ever wondered how and why the results you get in a search are in the order they’re in? Yes, some of this has to do with paid advertising. But budgets are not infinite. Or, at least, they aren’t for most of us.

But SEO is, in a way, a form of free advertising. Optimizing for search means your post gets placed further up on search results. And that’s good. But is it good enough?

Page 1 or Die

Writer SEO - Sweet Brown saying, ain't nobody got time for that, illustrating the concept of writer SEO
Preach, Sweet Brown.

We live in a hurry-up, impatient, “ain’t nobody got time for that” world. And a good 90% or more of us never bother with the second page of search results!

So, while positive changes in position are nothing to sneeze at, they do not truly matter unless you’re on page 1 of results.

If that seems unfair, odd, and maybe even a reason why the human race is doomed, well, I’m with ya on that.

Yet our preferences do not matter.

Ads Are Outta Control!

But… there’s one problem with writer SEO or really any kind of SEO. We’re all gunning for page 1. And that means that the competition is fierce.

There’s you, me, and large corporations with insanely big budgets. There are people who’ve been doing SEO since before it had a name (or at least it feels that way).  So, how do you compete?

I Got an Itch for a Niche

Exxon is enormous! Their annual ad budget may very well be more than everything I have ever made in my life. And probably ever will.

But they’re not competing in the writing space. Even if their CEO decided to write a book, they would not be my competition. And they might not even really be my competition if their CEO decides to try their hand at writing something in the exact same genre as me.

Is James Patterson my competition? Well, not exactly. Yes, we are both writers. But that’s where the comparison stops. Now, Patterson does write science fiction. But are we really in direct competition? For one thing, a lot of his sci fi stuff is aimed at teens. Mine … is not.

So, maybe I don’t have to worry about him, or at least not too much. Same with JK Rowling and Stephen King, particularly as they don’t really write in my genre.

I’ve Got a Niche to Scratch

Amazon is great about having separate categories which match a ton of niches. Consider horror. Even if vampires, werewolves, wendigos, mummies, and serial killers were all in the same novel or film, so what? They all still have their own sub-niches (if you will) within horror.

Science fiction has a number of well-known niches:

• Space opera – this is like Star Trek. My novel The Enigman Cave fits this niche, as it’s also following people on a spaceship.
† Dystopian – this is like Ready Player One. My novels Mettle and Untrustworthy both fit this niche, even though they’re set in different places.

• Science fiction noir – this is like Blade Runner or I, Robot, where cops and science fiction mix. My Obolonk and Time Addicts trilogies both fit. This is not a large genre and Amazon does not have it as a filter. But the good news is that there might not be a lot of competition…
† Time travel – this is like the old TV show, The Time Tunnel. Time Addicts fits this niche.
• Historical science fiction – now, this one’s tricky.

Issues with Historical Science Fiction

Science fiction isn’t normally set too far in the past. Even Stranger Things just goes back to the 1980s.

Without getting into Steampunk, one of the only examples I can think of are the films Time After Time (where HG Wells himself has to chase Jack the Ripper in the modern era) and Somewhere in Time (1970s playwright Richard Collier goes to the turn of the 20th century via hypnosis and falls in love with actress Elise McKenna).

In both stories, someone in the present is writing about the past. It makes sense that it would be a vehicle for a time travel story.

My Real Hub of the Universe trilogy fits this niche of a niche, which is so small that Amazon doesn’t list it as a genre (although at least GoodReads does!). And looking it up often means you find science fiction books written earlier in history, such as The Island of Dr. Moreau.

As a result, when you put that kind of work onto Amazon or the like, your tags and keywords had better be pitch-perfect and utterly on point.

Your Writer Website and Your Niche(s)

I’m not the only author who writes in more than one niche. In fact, many authors who do so will use a pen name or even several pen names.

So, for someone like me, writer SEO means looking at competition in all of these niches. And it means looking at the keywords which the more successful posts (the ones at the top of search, which don’t necessarily belong to bestselling authors) are using.

Keyword Research for Writer SEO

People who do SEO for a living are researching keywords pretty much all the time. It’s a fancy way of trying to determine what people are looking for. If you can give it to them, then you want them to be able to find you.

The closer what’s on your website matches their search, the higher up (usually) your content will be in search engine results.

Google’s mission is to match seeker and website owner as closely as possible. Because if a person has a good experience with Google, they’re more likely to use Google than, say, Bing.

As a result, Google can charge more for its advertising (and yes, unfortunately, paid ads are dominating the first page of search results. So page 2 can get some love after all—but never settle for anything lower).

Synonyms and Intent

To use an example a different form of art, consider film. Or cinema. AKA movies. Or pictures. AKA Hollywood or Bollywood or the Oscars or BAFTA awards, etc.

What is the difference in intent between these two searches:

† movie for kids not Disney
• classic cinema for children

Now, they both pull up lists of movies for the younger set. But the first is more likely to pull up articles about The Land Before Time, whereas the latter might pull up blog posts about The Red Balloon. Between the two searches, the first is more likely to pull up animation, too.

Now consider your books. I’ll use the Time Addicts trilogy as an example.

† time travel with robots
• science fiction noir in the far future

Both searches would fit this trilogy. The first gets a lot more hits. But the latter pulls up much more closely-related stuff. And if I change the first one to time travel with aliens (which would also fit Time Addicts), it gets me TV programs about ancient aliens.

What’s a better set of keyword phrases (kwps) to target? Probably some mix of these:

† science fiction noir
• sci fi noir
† science fiction set in the far future
• time travel noir (although currently there are two kinds of returns on this search which are coming up a lot)

Writer SEO, Searches, and Your Buyer Persona

Who’s your ideal reader? Your ideal customer? You have got to market directly to them. And you will need to write your blog and pages, etc. with that person in mind.

If your ideal reader didn’t finish high school, then a term like movies is more likely to work than cinema. And if your ideal reader is female, you may want to toss in terms like feminism or strong female character.

If your ideal reader is a member of the LGBTQ+ community, then you will need to use terms which will apply—but I would caution you to be careful here. Terms evolve quickly.

What was acceptable in 1999 is not necessarily going to fly in 2023. And for God’s sake, don’t try to reclaim a slur unless you would be a subject of said slur. And even then?

Just, don’t.

Writer SEO: Takeaways

Like I said above, this barely scratches the surface. Try tools like Keywordtool.io, answerthepublic.com, and MarketMuse (or Surfer SEO, Ubersuggest, or AhRefs) for more advanced ways to better target your ideal reader.Click to buy Untrustworthy on Amazon


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How to Create a Writer Website: What to Write About

It’s the first question pretty much any writer would normally ask anyway, and it concerns what to write about.

Do You Know What to Write About?

Let us start with one thing, and make it perfectly clear. Your writer website is (spoiler alert!) not your personal blog. Rather, it is a marketing tool.

Oh, and by the way, your Twitter stream (er, X stream), your author Facebook page and/or group, and BookTok? Guess what? They’re marketing tools as well!

This is not to say that you can never, ever be sociable. Actually, you should.

But there’s a line between sociable and confessional. For the most part (albeit not necessarily always), you do not want to cross it.

Consider What to Write About as You Consider Where that Writing is Actually Going

Wait, what?

What happens to your blog once you publish it? Well, you probably share it on social media. At least, if you want it to go to anyone, you sure as hell do.

In fact, Jetpack has a setting to get your writing out to social media. It’s pretty easy to set up and then it’s done.

This is not everything you should be tweeting, etc. You should be doing more than the barest of bare minima. But at least your stellar prose is going somewhere.

A Writer Newsletter — the World’s Greatest Landing Strip

Keep in mind, as I write this, I do not even have a writer newsletter yet! But I follow the newsletter my employer puts out. And I also follow the newsletters of some other writers, like Trinity Blacio. I look at what they say, and what they do not say. And, I check out how often they put out their newsletters.

And here’s what I have learned.

1. Newsletters that come out irregularly are probably not going to get you new readers. But they may appeal to your current fans. Still, you want to expand your base. Being consistent with your release schedule helps!

2. No one seems to know what to put in a writer newsletter, beyond a link to a free download and/or future appearance info. Why not reprint a part of some blog posts? And then link to the remainder!

3. Confessional newsletters should be few and far between. So, an irregularly published one might be able to get away with this. But if it’s a constant? Nope. A weekly newsletter, and maybe even a monthly one will get tiring very quickly if it’s only about how you’ve got writer’s block.

So, consider some of your landing strips when you write.

What do Your Readers Want to Read?

Beyond your fiction (or nonfiction), what do they want to know? Do they want to see anything about your process? Maybe they want to understand your characters better. Or maybe they want to get an idea of what’s coming out next.

But when considering what to write about, you also want to get inside the heads of this next group of folks.

What do Your Prospective Readers Want to Read?

Love it or hate it, if you’re an indie writer and you don’t just want to leave your writing in a drawer or on a hard drive somewhere, guess what? Congratulations, you are now a small business person.

What does that mean? It means that you should be trying to convert prospects.

I am not talking about clickbait here (although a little copywriting is probably fine if it’s not too aggressive). It is, rather, about trying to add some readers.

Here’s a Fer-Instance

Any number of die-hard Trekkies were appalled and clutched their pearls when a new timeline and new actors were introduced in the 2009 film. However, that film did something amazing. It attracted and hooked a new generation of viewers.

And when Paramount+ (it was CBS All Access at the time) added new series which were different from TOS, what happened? Oh, those same fanboys and fangirls clutched their pearls and sighed and screamed it wasn’t “real” Star Trek.

Yet Discovery and the other new series have also reeled in a new generation.

Resting on your laurels is comfortable and nice. But it also makes you irrelevant very, very quickly.

Back to You for What to Write About

I know how hard it is for so many indie writers to market. Believe me, I know! Why the heck do you think I got a Masters in Communication to begin with? It was, in part, because I wanted to learn how to market my own creations.

Still, consider it this way.

You’re a writer. Setting words to paper or pixels is in your DNA.

And you should also be an inventor and an experimenter.

So, throw some of that writing jello against the wall. Document it and measure it.

Who knows? Maybe some of it’ll even stick.

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