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Character Review — Lex Feldman

Consider Lex Feldman, One of My Original Characters

Who is Lex Feldman?

Lex Feldman is a kind of nervous but ultimately good person who gets Marnie to loosen up in some ways—and straighten up and fly right in others. He is an important character in the Enigman Cave Universe.

Where Did Lex Feldman Come From?

I went with Lex because I was watching reruns of The Tribe! The characters, of course, are rather different. For one thing, my Lex isn’t a jerk.

The Past is Prologue — Backstory for Lex Feldman

Competition for spots on wedge ships like the Valentina Tereshkova was fierce. Lex tried for the Chief Veterinarian job, but lost out to Tom Ciorciari. He was also breaking up with his last truly serious relationship before Marnie. For Lex, getting away to space is a way to heal.

But he can also spread his wings and become his own person.

Description

I see Oscar winner Adrien Brody here. It’s important for me to, in general, have Jewish actors playing Jewish characters. So, here we are.

Adrien Brody, who I see as Lex Feldman, DVM
Adrien Brody, who I see as Lex Feldman, DVM. Image is for reference purposes only.

He’s attractive but not 100% conventionally. I also love the idea of him being this twig of a person.

Yet he’s in love with Marnie, who is anything but a twig.

Purpose/Theme/Motivation

For Lex, most of his motivation is to be there for Marnie and support her in everything she does.

But he testifies for the side seeking to prove Enigmans are not intelligent.

When she chooses him to come along for First Contact, part of it is for moral support.

But he’s also there to essentially represent the animal side of things. Even with Enigman sapience essentially proven, there is always a smidgen of doubt.

Quotes

The scene: the hearing to try to prove Enigman intelligence. Here, Lex is cross-examined by Counselor Terry Lynn Shull. Hunter Garcia is serving as a magistrate.


Terry Lynn said, “Tell me, Doctor, do gorillas make gestures?”

“They do, and they can make gesture sequences, too.”

“Do they have a language?”

“We’re not sure.”

“Doctor, what’s a gorilla’s IQ?”

Lex motioned to his tablet and Hunter nodded. Lex clicked around a little. “Maybe seventy to ninety, but that’s just Koko, a gorilla who was taught to use American Sign Language. Gorillas without known sign language don’t necessarily have a measurable IQ, and Koko could have been mainly making herself look good.”

“How so?” Terry Lynn asked.

“She may have figured out that making gestures would get her what she wanted, but she didn’t necessarily truly comprehend much of what she was signing. If she signed for juice, let’s say, and she kept getting juice, she probably learned making a particular sequence of hand gestures meant she would get a cup of juice. But it might just be like a dog barking to ‘speak’ and then getting a treat. Both animals realize that if they do X, then Y happens. But it does not necessarily mean Koko understood that her sign for juice really designated juice. It’s not possible to tell if Koko understood it was a representation for the concept of juice.”

“What’s a dog’s IQ, Doctor?”

“Dog intelligence isn’t really measured like ours. It’s measured more in terms of problem solving, learning, and thinking. Cognitive processes, as it were.”

“Are Enigmans smarter or dumber than dogs, Doctor?”

“I have no idea.”

Relationships

Amy Allenby

Lex and Amy knew each other as children, and were on and off again for years. Marnie is particularly surprised when Amy writes to Lex and refers to him as Alec.

But Amy wants to stay in the Solar System, and she wants children. So, she and Lex parted ways and she married someone else.

With very little on her, even I can only conjecture. But he does at one point say she really did a number on him.

In all honesty, though, I have no idea of the specifics—and I created these characters!

Marnie Shapiro

When Marnie first walks into the Veterinary while he’s on duty, he’s nervous and clumsy, dropping a paper towel roll multiple times. For a junior guy used to working the night shift, a visit from the captain is a novelty. And, he already thinks she’s attractive.

When they go to Enigma (Tom is too shocked by finding chlorophyll and feels it’s all too much), they get overly excited when they first find alien life. And that leads to kisses.
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Conflict and Turning Point

As with the other characters in The Enigman Cave, Lex feels the change come when Carter takes over in the Solar System in a bloody coup d’etat.

But unlike many of the other characters seen in the book, he doesn’t get a chance to declare his stance.

In that way, I treat him like Sharon Townshend and Charlie Hill. But his stand should be obvious. He is as appalled and angered as Marnie is.

Continuity/Easter Eggs

I don’t really have much continuity for him. He’s basically just a solid, dependable love interest.

Future Plans

Since he wasn’t in the prequel, I don’t rightly know if/when I will bring him back. But he is quite literally a supporting character. I don’t see him as being the stuff of his own stories. But I can be persuaded by the right idea…

Lex Feldman: Takeaways

Sweet, smart, nervous, and definitely in over his head, Lex gives Marnie someone in her life who will give back all the caring she exudes to the crew. Because Ben Chase sure as hell never did.

Do  you want more character reviews? Stay tuned!

Lex Feldman — the character who lets the main character shine.


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Character Reviews: The Enigman Cave

Marnie Shapiro
Trixie LaRue
Jazminder Parikh, MD
Benjamin Chase
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Character Review — Ginny Carey

Consider Ginny Carey, One of My Original Characters

So, who is Ginny Carey?

The secondary communication officer (she works nights) on the Valentina Tereshkova is important to the storyline in The Enigman Cave. In particular, this is because she has a mathematics background.

… and she also just so happens to be Dr. Jazminder Parikh’s ex.

Where Did Ginny Carey Come From?

In a small way, Ginny’s origins depend on a sorority sister of mine. Alix was a math major who went to library school. I lost touch with her for decades and, unfortunately, only heard of her death after the fact. But I based Ginny on her (somewhat) while I still believed she was alive.

But there are a number of key differences between them.

The Past is Prologue — Backstory for Ginny Carey

I honestly never thought to give Ginny much of a backstory. The main thing that any reader should understand about her is that she has more of a math background than you would normally expect from a communications professional.

But that’s about it.

Description

Slight and looking younger than she really is, Ginny has medium brown hair and eyes and looks bookish. But that is because, well, she is. If the story was taking place in our current time, she would most likely be either a teacher of small classes or a tutor or a librarian.

Purpose/Theme/Motivation

Loyal to Marnie, Ginny has no qualms about finding odd communications and immediately reporting them up the command food chain.

However, since she is a lower decks character, she does not learn about the really bad stuff with Carter until a lot later in the story than the higher up characters do. And, because she and Jazzie are no longer dating, she cannot get any insider information that way.

As Marnie explains in the book, it’s to give people like Ginny plausible deniability. If the senior staff are arrested or even executed, the idea is that Ginny and people like her would have a fighting chance to escape punishment.

Quotes from Ginny Carey {she and Dr. Simon Mendoza are on the surface, looking to capture an alien animal}

Ginny and Simon walked to the stand of ferns and found undergrowth. “Here, jackalope, jackalope,” she called.

“Silly gal. What if it’s a Jill and not a Jack?”

“Is that even possible? What if they’re just single gender?”

“Me you’re asking? I have no idea.” He set down a cage on the ground. “Pity we don’t have bait. Any idea what they eat?”

“When Brian was down here, he said he saw one of them with a small fern frond in its mouth. But who knows which species of fern? Aren’t there, like, three dozen found so far?”

“Approximately,” Simon said. “Here jackalope, jackalope.” She elbowed him.

Relationships

The only relationship I have for her is the one with Jazminder. But why did they break up in the first place? According to the doctor, they just wanted different things out of life. But we’re only hearing one side of the story.

Then again, these are my characters, and I’ve only heard one side of the story as well. Hmm.

Conflict and Turning Point

Much like the main characters and higher-level supporting characters, Ginny’s turning point is essentially when it becomes obvious that the government at home is collapsing.

Continuity/Easter Eggs

Ginny Carey doesn’t star in any continuity or in any Easter eggs. And being more of a lower decks type of person, I did not put her into the prequel.

Future Plans

Right now, I don’t have any plans for her. However, there is some room in the Enigman universe for a sequel or two. In part, I covered some of this in the crossover story, Timelines are Alive. But Ginny was not in that one.

Also, there is a possibility that I might want to write a longer piece about returning to Earth and even confronting Carter and his cronies. Still, someone would have to stay behind on Enigma, and it makes more sense for someone in communications to do that.

For any of the protocols to actually make any sense, Marnie would have to take Astrid Hennigsen along, just in case there were any communications issues on the way back to the mother planet. By the same token, Marnie would also have to take Jazminder with her.

Hence, Ginny and Jazzie would most likely not have a reconciliation. Although keeping scenes of interacting with the Enigmans could work. I don’t know. The truth is, I have never really sat down and tried to map out a sequel.

Ginny Carey: Takeaways

For a lesbian ex-girlfriend character, she started off as being almost a throwaway character. But then I figured out the mystery and came to realize that she would be the most perfect person to solve it. Go, Ginny!


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Want More of Ginny Carey and the Rest of The Enigman Cave?

If The Enigman Cave resonates with you, then please be sure to check out my other blog posts about how our society handles first contact with a species that may be as primitive as Australopithecus.

Character Reviews: The Enigman Cave

Marnie Shapiro
Trixie LaRue
Jazminder Parikh, MD
Lex Feldman
Benjamin Chase
• Eileen Bragin

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Self-Review – Your Planet Smells Like Wet Dog

Time to Look at Your Planet Smells Like Wet Dog

I love this line, and the title came long before the plot of Your Planet Smells Like Wet Dog.

I wrote this story during the second quarter of 2018.

Background

The title or at least the idea of it came from a series of fan fiction stories I wrote during the 2010s. But this story has nothing to do with those, apart from the fact that the aliens in both instances are rather canid in both appearance and aspect.

Plot for Your Planet Smells Like Wet Dog

When Private Rachel Corcoran, a data specialist, arrives to work with a canid alien species to merge their database with ours, she commits an unpardonable diplomatic gaffe almost immediately.

Characters

The characters are Rachel Corcoran, her unnamed supervisor, the canid alien supervisor, and Rachel’s alien counterpart, Gray. There is a third alien, but they never speak and I do not describe them at all.

Memorable Quotes

The three aliens standing with us were fluffy, with foxlike ears and pointed snouts. As one, they all tilted their heads to one side as they listened to the translation through their version of earbuds. I tried not to chuckle.

Their leader, who was reddish, spoke and we waited for the translation. “What does that mean?”

My superior officer was about to answer for me when I just said, “Forget it. I’m an idiot. I’ve got no diplomatic experience, and it shows.”

My superior added, emphasizing the first word, “Private Corcoran here is not used to the niceties of embassies. Her background is in data. She’s here to help you integrate your records with our own.”

“Yes, yes, of course. My right hand here is versed in such things. We are all anxious to see how our two technologies can merge.” The canid leader indicated a shorter alien with a kind of blue merle fur pattern. They were all canid, but at least they were wearing clothes. Thank God for small miracles.

“We’ll leave you two to get acquainted,” my superior said. Then she whispered to me, “Try not to make an ass out of yourself again, Rachel.” I nodded and they left.

Genre and Overall Mood

The genre is hard science fiction. And while the initial bit would make you believe that we might even suffer an attack for Rachel’s inability to keep her trap shut, it turns out all right. And so, the overall mood is positive.

Rating for Your Planet Smells Like Wet Dog

The story has a K+ rating. There is some very mild language in there, and at the start, it does feel as if things could go south rather quickly.

Takeaways from Your Planet Smells Like Wet Dog

It is a wonder, in science fiction, how anything gets done properly. And perhaps one of the biggest issues, I believe, is that there could always be someone a lot like Rachel, who would engage her mouth a lot earlier than she would engage her brain.

Oops. But at least she did not start an interplanetary incident. So, we will give her a gold star for that one. A really, really small star. Let’s not get carried away here.

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Want More of my Short Stories and Novellas?

If this story resonates with you, then I hope you will check out some of my other blog posts about my shorter works.

And finally, for a complete list of my shorter works, please be sure to check out the Hub Page—Short Stories.

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Writing

So, what is all this about writing?

Boy oh boy, writing rules. I mean it.

The Before Time, Where There was Weeping and Wailing, and Gnashing of Teeth

So, one aspect of my career transition consists of writing a lot more. This has been both fiction and actual report-style stuff.

And I have found that I had truly missed it.

Sure, I had typed tons and tons of stuff before. But a lot of it covered such thrilling topics as documenting queries, or making lists of terms used by public service officers. It very rarely encompassed topics with wit, or style.

And I certainly did not have permission to make up any of it.

NaNoWriMo, I Loved You

I had known about NaNoWriMo for a while, but had never thought I had anything to offer.

In 2013, I woke up with an idea during the last week of October. I created a wiki and an outline for it, and I signed up.

And I wrote. And wrote.

Then about halfway through the month, I had finished. By the end of the month, the story had gone to beta readers and was edited.

But Now it is Over….

But I am still writing. RIP NaNoWriMo, but I can still do this on my own. And so, I will.

Now the Real Writing Fun Begins

Because, yes, it has been published.

It was and is the right thing to do, and the right path.

In addition, it feels fun. And it still feels pretty damned exciting. It feels like it is a fit.

Furthermore, it does not feel like something where I am stretching to fit into an idea dreamt up by someone else, or parallel a vision held by someone else. And I certainly do not feel like I was going through the motions. In addition, it does not feel like ho-hum, same old-same old.

Furthermore, it releases a pent-up inner artist who was shouted down by pretty much everyone I knew for way, way too long in my life. And that is exceptionally freeing.

It feels right. And it feels honest. So it feels free. It feels good.

And it feels like it is about damned time already.

Takeaways, the Future, and All That for Writing

The WIPs (works in progress) are piling up. And the publication dates of Untrustworthy and various anthologies are retreating further and further into the past. Although the Lizzie Borden House anthology at least is a lot more recent.

So, what does that mean? Well, in all honesty, it means I am probably going to go the self-publishing route, sooner rather than later.

Is it a good idea? I have no idea. But it is better than doing absolutely nothing. And it is also a damned sight better than just letting it all rot on my hard drive.

Pretty soon, it will be time to fling it out to the universes. Damn the torpedoes, and full speed ahead.Click to buy Untrustworthy on Amazon

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Your Elevator Pitch

Let’s Deconstruct Your Elevator Pitch

We have all heard of what an elevator pitch is. It seems like it is the kind of stuff for some overly eager new sales associates looking to make an impression on the big boss between floors.

But there is more to it than that.

Someone has just turned to you and asked, “You’re a writer. What is your book about?”

Don’t just stand there! You have got to be ready.

Some Ideas for Your Verbal Elevator Pitch

Try something like this on for size.

Imagine if animals started talking, and they told you what to do in a topsy-turvy world.

My book is about Alice; she’s a young girl, a little bored on a sunny afternoon, when she spots a white rabbit. The odd thing about this rabbit is, he’s wearing clothes and talking. She follows him down a rabbit hole, but then she can’t get out.

That is less than seventy words, and the person asking has the basic plot, the name of the main character, and a reason to want to know more.

Also, you do not give away any spoilers with this pitch. Is that important? You had better believe it is.

Your Pitch in Writing

Yes, you need one of these, too. But a written elevator pitch is going to be a little different.

Even if readers know you for writing sweeping, epic sagas, you should still write some short stories. They can be in your universe, or not, although it might help with both marketing and your own personal creativity if they can fit somewhere within your universe.

They do not even necessarily have to be sent out for publication, but they could be good for anthologies. Do not knock that. This is exactly how a lot of people get their starts.

In fact, if you are having trouble breaking in, or want to impress a publisher, try submitting to anthologies. You can get a publication credit and impress the publisher of the anthology. And maybe also impress other publishers.

That is a win-win right there.

Point them there, if someone wants to read a sampling of your work. Do not make them commit to a 100,000 word novel.

Unless, of course, you really feel like alienating a potential customer.

In all seriousness, never, ever do something like that.

How Do You End Both Types of Elevator Pitches?

Why, with a call to action, of course! Why, here’s one right now.

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On Balance

Finally, try to have some fun with it. Is your main character funny?

What about quoting one of her best zingers, assuming you do not need to explain the joke (that is key)?

Now that is an off-beat idea for a pitch.

And it just might be memorable enough to snag you a customer.

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Community Management for Indie Authors – Let’s Get this Party Started

One way you can get the party started for selling your books and short stories (and perhaps poetry, memoirs, book covers, etc.) is to create an online community for readers and prospective readers.

Here are some tips on how to get everything moving.

Indie Writers – Getting This Party Started

W00t!! Come on and get this party started! So, you have made the decision to have a forum on your website, or a Facebook group. That is great!

It can be for any number of reasons, such as to generate sales leads or bring together your beta readers.  And so, you might have a site with forums, done up in Drupal, or maybe using a PHP application out of the box.

Or it might exist on Facebook exclusively. Or perhaps you have conjured up your own proprietary software.

And … nothing.

You have no users, no content, no conversations. The community should be a hubbub of activity, a virtual village. Instead, you are stuck with a ghost town.

Whaddaya do now?

Do not panic.

Recognize that no one wants to be first attendee at a party. So, you have got to get the party started. But how?

Success?

For any website to succeed, you need to be strong in four areas:

• Design
† Metrics/Measurement
• Content and
† SEO (Search Engine Optimization)

So let us operate under the assumption that you have the first two set (and, if you do not, make sure you fix, perfect and beautify your design as much as possible). If you are not already getting metrics, go get Google Analytics.

Now with those two set, you can, fortunately, work on the other two together. First of all, we will work on some elementary Search Engine Optimization. SEO divides into optimizing onsite and optimizing offsite. So start with a few basic offsite measures.

Create an X or Bluesky (or both) account for your website, and start to fill it with content. Follow likely members, or people you want to attract. In short, be a good netizen.

For Facebook

FB already has metrics and good design. SEO in this instance is creating more discoverability. This means posting when your customers and prospects are online (check demographic trends and do some trial and error experimenting) and posting regularly.

Also, always use an image! Numerous studies show posts with images cut through the noise a lot better than those without.

Content

For onsite SEO, it is time to move onto content. Because there is an intimate connection between the two of them.

Furthermore, your future users are going to want to see topics. And they are going to want to see them started by a number of different people. You will need to pull in some friends for this, and divide the new topics up as much as possible. Be sure to start with topics like this:

† Welcome to the New Members/Getting to Know You
• Basic News from outside your company, about you (if you have a company blog or press page already, link to them here and
† A few (say, half a dozen) topics showcasing your best keywords but are written for humans to read

For Facebook

Try a variant on the above by posting regularly and finding good, engaging topics. Experiment and figure out what your audience likes. Of course, do more of that. A lot more.

Keywords

That brings us to keyword research. Go to competitor sites, right-click and select “View Source”. Which keywords are they using? Consider using similar if not the same ones.

So if your book is about, say, infant and child care, your main keywords and key phrases are probably going to be words and phrases like infant, child, child care, childcare, children, baby, babies, pregnancy.

Do Google searches using these keywords and key phrases, with and without the words forum or community added.

Look at keywords and key phrases for those sites as well. Because you want to keep thinking of terms that your target audience will use for their own searches. Incorporate these words into your site and into the titles of some of your first topics.

Look at synonyms! If baby works better than infant, then use baby in the title but you can still put infant within the body of the post. Think like someone searching. What are they really looking for?

Specifics to Get Your Own Forums Party Started

Do not be afraid to be specific, for a child care book, try topics on such subjects as teething, sibling rivalry and readiness for kindergarten. Keep the keywords in the titles if you can logically and grammatically put them there.

Consider some really niche topics, such as handling siblings who are acting out because one child has special needs or a terminal illness. Because searchers are looking for those answers as well.

Now, you have some content, and you are getting some SEO, even if you are still low in rankings (do not worry, it is percolating). But you still need users. Here is where invitations come in. You, me, all of us – we have online networks.

We all have friends on Facebook, followers on X and Instagram and a network on LinkedIn, and a whole host of other groups of online acquaintances.

Plus we have friend and family email addresses.

Send Out Invitations to Get the Party Started

So craft an invitation. Make it polite, pleasant, simple and short. Be definite about what your forums are about (e. g. write more than “Please check out my site.”). So, if it is a writing community, mention that!

In particular, if you know people who like forums (perhaps you already regularly post on some other forums site, even if the main subject is radically different), invite those people.

And do this in small doses, say, 30 people at a time. This will keep an influx of new members from overwhelming you. And you can greet everyone personally, at least to start. Furthermore, it will add to the feeling of exclusivity that a small site can engender.

Do not worry if people start inviting others to your site, even these are people you have never heard of before. Because this is a good thing. You want them to do this.

So look for sites to link to you, and be sure to get reciprocal links. Consider adding a blog to provide directed quality content if you do not already have one. Furthermore, it will keep your users updated as to outages and new features as you add them.

Add a Facebook fan page for your site, although I would recommend waiting at least a little while after launching. After all, if no one likes you on Facebook, you will have the same issue. It is trying to attract people who do not want to be first.

Furthermore, you will need at least 30 Facebook fans (that number may rise in the future) to get metrics. And then you can really get this party started.

For a Community Strictly on Facebook

You can invite people via direct message. But be sure to target them as well as possible. Too much willy-nilly pushes to get uninterested people to join will be seen as spammy. You could find yourself in FB jail for that. So, be judicious.

But above all, have fun. And get this party started!

Want More About Community Management?

If my experiences with community management resonate with you, then check out my other blog posts about how online communities work.

Here are some posts about my years in community management, and what I have learned.


A Day in the Life of a Community Manager
Going From a Collection of Users to a True Community
Risks of a Community Without Management
Are Off Topic Posts Ever Okay?

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… And Facebook for All – Offsite Sharing for Independent Authors

Offsite sharing is a bit like old-fashioned door to door marketing. But it has a modern twist and modern metrics. Both are ideal for the independent writer of today.

… And Facebook for All — Offsite Sharing

Offsite sharing is a fascinating concept. Perhaps the most compelling feature of Facebook consists of the availability of the Like button. And it is in so many places that there are likely many end users who can scarcely recall a time when it did not yet exist.

The Like Button and Offsite Sharing

Because the offsite Like Button dovetails beautifully with its presence on the site itself, i.e.,

“The Like button lets a user share your content with friends on Facebook. When the user clicks the Like button on your site, a story appears in the user’s friends’ News Feed with a link back to your website.”

Drag and Drop

Furthermore, the site tries to make it easy for even novice programmers (and people who can really only do drag and drop) to place a Like Button on their own sites for offsite sharing.

The premise is irresistible. You add the Like Button, people like your own site, and that information transmits back to Facebook and to the likers’ friend lists.

In addition, their friends, who may not have know about you at all, suddenly do, and the offsite sharing spreads even more. They, hopefully, check you out, like you, and the process repeats on and on, ad infinitum, or at least in theory.

And with enough intersecting friends with enough non-intersecting additional friendships, a few likes could translate into dozens, if not hundreds, or even thousands, of new people who know about you.

If those start to translate into sales, then you are golden.

Engagement and Reach

However, engagement and reach are both going down. And Facebook actually has the gall to try to get people to pay for what it does. Quelle horreur!

But, seriously folks, how do you think Facebook pays its bills? They do it with advertising. If users will not be charged (and Facebook would be mighty foolish to start charging all of those free sources of detailed consumer data), then advertisers will be.

And of course that already happens.

What gets a lot of people’s undershorts knotted is that the freebie advertising is harder and harder to implement. Facebook seems to push everyone with a page to start buying likes to get more offsite sharing.

Thumb on the Scale?

Whoa, Nelly! Because that would be kind of unethical, if the site was deliberately putting a thumb on an imaginary scale and making it harder for indie authors and others to reach their fans without paying for reach and engagement.

So, are they doing that?

While the jury is still out (after years!), I am still inclined to say no. After all, the site grows by leaps and bounds on a second by second basis. And so engagement and reach dilute without Facebook having to do a damned thing.

Finally, does the site benefit from making it harder for page and group administrators to connect for free? Absolutely. But do they have to work in order to create this condition?

Probably not (or at least, not much). Life does it for them.

Offsite Sharing: Takeaways for Indie Writers

Beyond issues with Russian interference and how the Facebook algorithm can sometimes tamp down third parties, offsite sharing can work pretty well there.

Political and other paid ads, though, are another story. They are a reminder that, every year, Facebook becomes more and more of a pay to play platform.

Hence if you want to share something from off the site, or you want to sell from your site by sharing to FB, then your shared content might be lost amidst the paid stuff.

You may simply have to attribute it to life in the big Facebook city, and start paying for some ads. So be it.


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Want More About Facebook?

If my experiences with Facebook resonate with you, then please be sure to check out my other blog posts about the largest social network on the planet, by far.

Creating a Facebook page
Working with a Facebook Page
… Your Profile Page
Offsite Sharing
All Your Account Settings
All the Rest of It
Facebook versus Forums

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How Online Community Managers Can Follow Indie Author Requirements Yet Go With the Flow

As an independent author, yours is often a one-person business. So, if you have a larger fan base, you may be acting as a community manager along with the rest that you do. Maybe an assistant (in person or virtual) or two may work as community managers for you.

Your community may be a traditional forum or a Facebook group, or something else. Still, many of these ideas and rules apply to all of these kinds of online communities.

Online Community Managers Can Follow Structure But Still Go With the Flow

For many community managers, the idea of putting together a new online destination can be a little… scary. For an indie author depending on them, the stakes could not be higher.

And so, they might embrace structure and rules and your (perhaps corporate) requirements with zeal. And that is great!

But that is only part of it. Going with the flow can also bring results. And, I might add, it may be the best way to start, grow, and sustain a community.

So, it is best to start at not the absolute beginning. Rather, we are going to start with a small community that already exists. Your definition of small may differ from mine, so recognize that your mileage may vary.

Think of it as, perhaps, a community you just bought. Or maybe you have exhausted your friends and family and are looking to leap to the next degree of relationship with you—acquaintances. Or maybe you want to go even further, and into stranger territory.

Community Managers: From Small Things, Big Things Sometimes Come

Every forum starts out small. Getting started is one thing. How do you get big?

The secrets to getting big go hand in hand with those for getting started: Search Engine Optimization and content. And yes, this includes AI optimization.

SEO

Start with SEO. If you have not checked your keywords in three months, check them now. Compare them to your competitors, and check Google Adwords. Consider changing up your keywords for a while and see if you can draw more traffic.

The basic principles of offsite SEO still apply. Yes, even now, in the age of AI search.

Get your site linked to by other sites which are more popular. Also, consider article marketing (if appropriate) and guest blogging. Perhaps some of your best content can be repurposed as articles or blog entries.

Ask the creator(s) of that content for their permission (even if your Terms of Service say that you own all posts, this is courteous) and update and repackage the content.

Articles can still be a great way to generate interest in your site so long as you add your URL into the “About the Author” section. And make it clear that you allow reprint rights only so long as the article remains completely intact, including the “About the Author” section.

Blogging

One good blog deserves another. If you want to see if your better content can go on other blogs, why not create your own site blog? So, at minimum, you can use it to inform your users of site changes and planned outages. But you can use it for a whole lot more.

Because you can showcase and expand better content, announce contests and promotions, and keep important site information front and center. Plus, if you add a blog, you can again make the rounds of basic social media bookmarking sites such as Reddit.

Add an RSS feed if you have not already. You can often feed it into Twitter (X) and Facebook using a promotional site like HootSuite. And for blogs, you can usually just link to the appropriate feed and have WordPress do the reposting for you. I do.

Facebook

Create a Facebook fan page and, at minimum, populate it with the RSS feed. Community managers can also use it to assure users if your site goes down, particularly for unexpected outages. Because such an outage can make some users nervous.

So, Facebook (and X/Twitter, too) can be a means by which you reassure them. But do not stop there! You can also use Facebook as a means of attracting people to the site by reposting the good stuff. This is good old fashioned social media marketing.

Site Redesign

Another area where you might be able to better grow your user base is with some site redesign. Be careful with this as a community can often take (frequently somewhat unfounded) proprietary interest in the site look and feel.

One way you can ease users into a change is by telling them (never ask for permission) that you are going to be testing some site changes. Consider using A/B testing and compare a few different versions and see which one works better.

Simplified Registration

Consider simplifying your registration process, if you can, and embrace user-centered design. You still want to use a captcha code, and you still want to have your members sign up with a real, usable email address.

Plus, you must to comply with GDPR if you sell in Europe, or think you might in the future.

But look at your process and see if there are any unnecessary hurdles. Are you asking for something like a middle name or home city for a potential user? This is kind of useless, and many users would feel that home city information would be excessively intrusive.

Jettison the question and your registrations might increase.

Since you are tinkering with the signup process and not the overall look and feel of the site, your regular membership might not take so much of a proprietary interest. They might not even notice.

But Google, which cares a lot about UX design when it comes to search, will notice. And AI? It will probably notice, too.

Analysis

Check your metrics. Small things on a daily basis are not going to matter too much. But if you have a continuing decline over time, or if membership is staying the same and not really increasing much, you may need to take action.

To grow your site, continue to promote fundamental principles: improve your site design and test it; take care to add and promote good, keyword-rich content; and continue good onsite and offsite SEO practices.

And be patient as small things become bigger ones. Most communities were not built in a day.

And keep in mind that truly organic communities do not stay on topic forever. But that is okay. It is a big part of going with the flow.

Community Managers: What About Going off Topic?

Is going off topic ever a good idea? Surprisingly, yes. There is nothing more like going with the flow than going off-topic.

And this is a part of every community, and it is a sign of health. Never worry about this. Because otherwise, people are not interacting naturally.

How Community Managers Can Fix the Problem

Well, it is not much of a problem, truth be told. Still, targeted off-subject conversations can work. There may be targeted, related topics you can try, if you are having problems getting engagement or people sticking around.

So, give your users more topic leeway, and they might be more inclined to stay and become customers.

And then there are the superstar users who, seemingly, can do no wrong.

Community Managers: Consider Superstar Users

What are superstar users? Some people just seem to be born with it. If you have ever spent some time on forums, you immediately know who they are.

Their topics rarely go without a response for long. And their contributions are routinely applauded (either using available site software or via written praise) by the other users. Their absences are lamented (and noticed!).

Such superstar users can be made by the community, or can be nudged along by Community Managers. The community can sometimes choose stars that do not promote your own vision very well. But you can combat this by selecting some superstars of your own.

How Community Managers Can Start Converting Users into Superstars

How do you make superstar users? Almost the same way that the community does. However, you may have some added tricks up your sleeve. First of all, choose a few likely candidates. Go into your member list and sort by number of posts, from most to least.

Select your top 20 posters.

You probably know who they are already. But if you do not, if you have a posts/day statistic, copy that down. Put all of this into a spreadsheet. Add in the dates each user joined the site and the dates of their most recent posts (which may be the day you compile this information).

If anyone has overwhelmingly negative social signals (vote downs, ignores, complaints or reports against them), if you can put your hands on that information quickly, discard that member from your list and replace him or her with the next one.

Ignore sock puppets and second accounts, if you have good proof that two accounts belong to the same person.

Again, just move onto the person with the 21st-most posts/day, etc.

Now look at your list. Who is the member with the most recent posting date, with the highest number of posts/day, who has been a member the longest? Rank that person #1 and rank everyone else in order behind him or her. Ties are fine.

This is a rough calculation, not meant to be perfect.

Researching Superstar Users

Now you will need to do a little more research. If you have this data readily available, use it: the section(s) of the site where your top 20 users spend most of their time. This could divide by tags or subforums or categories.

It really depends on however your site is divvied up. However, if this information is not readily available, research it by investigating the last 10 posts for all likely users.

Of course, their most recent 10 posts could potentially not be perfectly characteristic of their behavior on the site. So, you take that chance. Nothing is set in concrete; you can always revisit this later.

If your #1 user most recently created 10 posts that are all on message or in the section(s) of the site devoted to your message, that person stays at #1. But if not, weigh them against their 19 competitors.

And if #2 is close to #1 but a lot more on message, switch their rankings. Also use this measurement of being on message (or not) to resolve any ties.

Continuing

Now look at your list again. #1 should be the user who is most on message, with a lot of posts and recent activity, who has a long history on the site and whose negative social signals are minor.

There are usually some negative social signals, particularly for long-time, popular posters. That is fine; just try to stay away from universally reviled people. This is the first person you want to approach.

And, how do you approach them? Handle this both indirectly and directly.

Indirectly by promoting their posts, topics and replies, with up votes, applause, positive ensuing comments and making their topics sticky. In short, do whatever your software allows which provides them with attention and positive reinforcement.

Never do this all at once. Spread it out over time. Community managers, you are in a marathon, not a sprint here. Provide the same indirect positive reinforcement to your other candidates, but less as you go down your list.

Directness

The direct approach: engage them, both openly on the boards and in private messages (most sites have the means to do this). You should never out and out flatter them. Instead, offer encouragement or point out their posts that you find interesting.

Or tell them about posts from other members that you feel might interest them. Again, do not do this all at once. Offer these little tidbits gradually.

Every few months or so, review your list and consider whether to add or drop anyone. If you have made friends with these users then of course never drop them from your personal life just because they have gone off message too much!

But certainly, curtail any official Community Manager messages to them if there are others who would be more receptive.

Why do Community Managers Want to do This?

Superstar users can help to bring your site out of a funk. They can (and do) make you aware of spam. Superstar users create and promote good content. They help trolls lose their power. They can help to calm the site down and ease it into and out of transitions.

You can count on them.

However, they need to feel valued. And, even more importantly, they need to feel that you only call on them when you want something.

Provide positive reinforcement when there is no crisis and you will be able to call on them when there is one. And the corollary is true as well: superstar users, if unappreciated, will leave, and other users will follow them out of your forum.

Ignore them at your peril.


Want More About Community Management?

If my experiences with community management resonate with you, then check out my other articles about how online communities work.

Community Management Tidbits

A Day in the Life of a Community Manager
Analytics
Get Together
Going From a Collection of Users to a True Community
Let’s Get this Party Started
Look at Me!
Risks of a Community Without Management
Snakes in the Garden
The Circle Game
† Are Off Topic Posts Ever Okay?

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Four Important Social Media Stats for Writers

The four important social media stats are for writers and non-writers alike!

Consider These Four Important Social Media Stats

These were four important social media stats for you! This post was, in part, a riff on Four Great Free Tools and Four Important Stats. And I like the important stats. As for the four free tools, I’ll reserve judgment for another day.

These are still somewhat important, but keep in mind that the numbers have undoubtedly changed.

STAT 1 for Writers

53% of people on Twitter recommend companies and/or products in their Tweets, with 48% of them delivering on their intention to buy the product. (ROI Research for Performance, June 2010)

However does this takes into account what essentially looks like spamming (e. g. buy this stuff!) versus what seems to be more sincere mentions of products, e. g. someone says I love this new Gatorade or I think my New Balance sneakers really make me faster?

I know it can be difficult for a large-scale survey of tweets to tell the difference between the two. However, if there is that much of a return, then I figure, the people either know or, perhaps, they just don’t care.

For authors, your best bet may very well be to make sure that your work is a part of the overall conversation. But not in the way of, “A story about the president? Well, here’s my story about a turtle and a Shetland sheepdog!” It’s…probably not related. So, don’t go there.

STAT 2 for Authors

The average consumer mentions specific brands over 90 times per week in conversations with friends, family, and co-workers. (Keller Fay, WOMMA, 2010) – Just what  does this mean? I mention products all the time, but it doesn’t necessarily mean I’m touting them.

Ugh, I hate what they did to my conditioner! Why did John Frieda have to change it?

And that is a far cry from I want some more of that Amy’s Low-Salt Marinara Sauce with Basil – sooo good.

Since the stat doesn’t mention whether the mentions went positive or negative, I suppose it’s a corollary to the old saw, that any press is good press. Note: sentiment analysis is better than it used to be, but still has a ways to go.

For writers, the best move may be to get a conversation centered on your work going, and keep it going.

STAT 3 for Independent Authors

Consumer reviews are significantly more trusted – nearly 12 times more – than descriptions that come from manufacturers, according to a survey of US mom Internet users by online video review site EXPO. (eMarketer, February 2010)

This is how viral marketing works, kids. Because if a company can send out its minions to tout a product, even if not 100% positively (and it’s more believable that way, as it doesn’t look like mere puffery), then folks eat that up. Astroturfing Nation, here we come.

Here’s a counter-example.

When Untrustworthy first came out, people would privately message me and tell me that they liked it. Well, this is lovely and all, but at the time, I had none or nearly no public reviews.

And so, I nicely asked those folks to please review me, preferably on Amazon. I would provide the link, of course! And even when people said it wasn’t their cup of tea, I asked them to review the book, anyway.

Why?

Because a set of 100% five-star reviews for a brand-new author looks rather suspect. Warts and all, my reviews are the real deal.

STAT 4 for Indie Writers

In a study conducted by social networking site myYearbook, 81 percent of respondents said they’d received advice from friends and followers relating to a product purchase through a social site.

74 percent of those who received such advice found it to be influential in their decision. (Click Z, January 2010)

However, this may be more of a function of the pervasiveness of social sites versus their influence. E. g. I truly only hear from some of my cousins through Facebook.

Do I give their opinions more credence than I do passing acquaintances’? Sometimes. But do I get this Facebook-based advice from them because we don’t pick up the phone or send snail mail or meet in person (we’re too far away to do this, anyway).

But to my mind, this is almost like giving the phone company credit for marketing strategy if we chat on the phone. We don’t. Instead, we use Facebook. I think this is a potential confusion of medium versus message.

For authors, your best bet is likely to involve yourself in

Where Do We Go From Here With These Four Important Social Media Stats?

So, are social sites really that important? Is X (Twitter) really that targeted? Perhaps not as much as it was. Do consumers really trust their pals more than they do slick, conventional marketers? Probably maybe, not really and yes.

Even years later, it’s up to the writer (acting as their own Social Media Marketer) to separate the wheat from the chaff with these kinds of stories, and see what’s really going on.

What do you think?

Fifteen Years After This Post Was First, Er, Posted…

… (and over five since it was last posted) keep in mind that numbers shift and, these days, Twitter is called X, anyway.

But these metrics are still good, and they are still vital. For larger businesses, getting case studies published, and getting brand ambassadors on board, is still a terrific and inexpensive way to market. For writers, that translates into reviews.

These types of marketing build trustworthiness (the ‘T‘ in Google’s E-EAT). They also help to build and bolster word of mouth, which is still a vital piece of any marketer’s strategy.

And in the world of AI, trustworthy and clear reviews and answers are a lot more likely to pass muster and be recommended by the likes of, say, Google Gemini.

So, don’t discount these metrics, okay? But do be sure to take the numbers with a grain of salt.


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Writers: Do You Want More About Social Media?

If my experiences with non-platform-specific social media resonate with you, then please be sure to check out my other blog posts about navigating our social media obsessed world.

Social Media in Our Society

Social Media Continues its Relentless Pace
Social Media Background Check Being Used For Jury Selection
How Social Media Can Ruin Your Life
Happy Holidays, Social Media Style

Working with Social Media

A Day in the Life of a Social Media Marketer
Social Networking/Social Media Tips
The Best Lengths for Social Media Posts and More
Jell-O on the Wall: Social Media Perfection is Fleeting

Social Media for Writers

The Power of Social Media (Neurotic Writers’ Edition)
Social Media and Writing
Social Media and Writing Part 2
Social Media and Writing Part 3
Are You Promoting Your Writing With Social Media?

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Trust Your Readers

I wrote a good chunk of this blog post on Facebook in response to a request to review a rather detailed outline that, unfortunately, seemed to have far too many of the wrong details. And the thought that I kept coming back to was this one: trust your readers.

Why Should You Trust Your Readers?

The idea behind trusting your readership is that you know and acknowledge that they are intelligent. They don’t have to get an infodump about everything and anything that happens in your characters’ lives.

Not every moment is fraught, and not every moment matters.

You know, just like in real life.

How Do You Trust Your Readers?

One easy way you can trust your readers is to not spoon feed them every single little bit. You don’t have to provide explanations for everything. For example, there are some foreign words and phrases that most Americans (assuming your readers are Americans) just know.

Which words and phrases?

These are phrases and words like bonjour, aloha, shalom, déjà vu, mañana, pasta e fagioli, omega, fjord, and carpe diem. Most importantly, these are words that you really do not need to translate for your readers.

But words like shemesh, limpia para brisa, or folgen? You’d better translate them. By the way, in order, that’s Hebrew for sun, Spanish for windshield wiper, and German for follow.

You can help out your readers by adding context, too. That’s still being trusting. But it’s also being practical and helpful. It also helps you maintain the suspension of disbelief, because making your readers run for a dictionary will make disbelief come crashing down, fast.

Hey, Wait a Second!

What about all those people who don’t know the more common foreign words and phrases? Won’t the act of not translating make their suspended disbelief come crashing down?

Well… maybe.

So, consider your ideal reader. If that person is college educated, then don’t bother explaining what aloha means. But if your ideal reader is a preschooler, then explain it, even if your ideal reader’s parent or grandparent reading to them has a college education.

And if your ideal reader is somewhere in the middle, then use your best judgment. And no matter what, remember that context is your best friend.

So, if your main character is served a dish of prosciutto, and they say, “Ugh, I keep kosher. I won’t eat ham, not even this fancy Italian ham,” then your readers are covered.

You can trust your readers to be smart, and able to follow context.

Here’s an Exercise in Trust

Do yourself an enormous favor, and watch one (or all of them, if you like) of the following classic films.

I’m suggesting older classic films—even though storytelling has changed a bit, and writing for films isn’t identical to writing a book, but it’s close enough for this particular purpose, because they’re often easier to find on cable or streaming or the like:

† The Wizard of Oz
• It’s a Wonderful Life
† The Andromeda Strain (the older one from the 70s, not the remake)

There’s nearly nothing, if anything, about these characters’ ordinary lives. Rather, the films mainly start off with a very short normal scene, but then chaos is introduced very quickly.

Dorothy is in gray Kansas, bored, wondering if there’s something more out there. George Bailey is on a bridge, considering jumping. Military personnel in hazmat suits discover a town where almost everyone has mysteriously died.

Nobody returns a library book. No one lingers over a meal unless something important is being said. No one’s morning ritual makes it to the screen.

An Idea to Make Sure You Trust Your Readers and Write Accordingly

Consider your writing and your chapters like your budget. Chapter 1 costs some amount, the next chapter costs something, etc. It’s as if, in order to get someone to pay attention, you literally have to ‘pay’ something.

Are you with me so far?

Your budget is limited, and you only have enough to get to Chapter 6 or so. However, you can economize (like getting a coupon) when you cut out the fluff.

Chapter 1 will always ‘cost’ the most because it’s the first chapter. Chapters 2 and 3 are also costly but not as much as Chapter 1.

Your final chapter is also fairly costly, and your penultimate chapter is more than for an average chapter, but not really in the same league as Chapters 2 and 3 and your final chapter.

Save on your ‘budget’ by eliminating the regular, day to day, ho-hum stuff that everyone does, unless you can justify it somehow.

If the return of a library book comes with an important conversation that will solve the mystery or lay the groundwork for the romance (or whatever your genre and main plot are), then by all means keep it!

But in that case, keep in mind that the conversation is the part that goes front and center, not the drive or walk to the library itself.

Every time you knock out a dull, pedestrian scene, you can think of it as ‘paying for’ another chapter. You need to make and keep your story something worthwhile for people to want to spend their time on. And, real money, if you plan to sell your work.

If this analogy doesn’t work for you, then consider this.

Real Life Isn’t Like This

No doubt you see people in your life who you don’t live with. In fact, you see them all the time. Classmates, coworkers, people at a gym or a market, folks at a house of worship or club or a park or whatever.

How did those people get up in the morning? Most likely, they brushed their teeth, maybe ate something, washed their faces, possibly showered or bathed, and they put on clothes.

You did not see them do these things. Yet you know they did all or most of the things I just mentioned. You did not need to witness those things, to know they happened.

Your readers don’t have to witness those actions, either. And, truth be told, they probably do not care about those things too terribly much, and they probably don’t think of them much, if at all.

Trust your readers to understand that every bit of this has happened, unless the method is somehow important or things didn’t happen as they normally do, and that matters to the overall plot.

Your readers are smart enough to understand these things happened. You will never have to tell them.

And if you ever try to, don’t be in shock if they behave as if you’re insulting their intelligence. Because, spoiler alert, you are.

Trust Your Readers — Takeaways

Being trusting means you can scrap the unnecessary scenes unless you lace them with meaningful dialogue or interactions or the like. A drive to the library can be important if the main character gets into a crash, or comes out to someone, etc.

But it’s the other stuff that’s vital. The window dressing could be anything.

If you ever wonder if you’re not trusting enough, consider what happens if you replace a scene with something else. If you can move the story along with a walk in the park versus a drive to the library, then your book return scene can probably be scrapped.

But keep the important conversation or the like.

Trust your readers’ intelligence.

And trust your readers, full stop.
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